This Is right up my alley and and a very promising start!
There is so many spelling misstakes/grammatical errors though that it breaks the immersion a bit, but that is easily fixed!
I love this kind of games, got meself a "monster" (hardy har har, monster, more a pokemon) stiffy playing it through. Too bad there isn't more content or i woul've cum in my knickers!
I'd give this a
5/10 for originality
6/10 for story-telling
2/10 for character art
5/10 for replay value
4/10 for interactivity
8/10 for initial release content and building block.
So it's pretty good for a initial 'beta' or first release.
I'd definetly will follow this development.
So while there is some merrit in what is writen below.
I dont think the story is all that bad.
Its a bit fast pased and you have a couple of lovely options inthere that is skipped out on very often
So definitly NOT LIKE OTHER sissy games!!
The couple of routes you pick already do have massive impact on the storyline.
For example there is a ABDL route!
(which honestly to my oppinion there are way to little games that include this kink)
So that is enough merrit on its own
I do agree things go a bit fast and are a bit unrealistic
Things that happen to him
I personally loved the whole forced thing its great!!
If this is going to be more of a shorter story then having him being shot this quickly in to the whole feminization thing is fine
Otherwise i would probably slow it down a little make things be dragged out have him slowly be hypnotized and start out with more lighter outfits
I love the closet aspect and that he has litterally no control over what he wears is great
Love all the forced love the whole ABDL thing its adorable
Cant wait to see more.
And these critis below while they have some merrit it doesnt make it a bad game at all
You tried to flesh out the story pretty well and there is alot of detail too
Great art love the pictures included
I do have to agree to the post bellow.
I have only one think to add.
(you can view it as an universal truth)
No mater the quality or quantity is of a game if you can grab the players mind/imagination, then it is a crushing success, if not then its a faillure no mater what any one say or advertise it.
This one faills miserably.