A good start, we can see that he made efforts to create this game. Yet the tfs are instant and leads to a game over, which is pretty sad.
Keep going with game and see what it turns into. Monline is one of my favorite games in this site as well as Student Transfer, Press Switch, Magical Camp, Prisoners of the Elder One and Re: Dreamer. This game reminds me aloy of Gotta F Em All. You may need to add some RPG elements to the mix. Go ahead and play Gotta F Em all and decide if you want to be more of a puzzle based game or an actual RPG game like Monline is.