When an "accident" gives you the ability to dominate others, you do the only thing any rational person would do: Build a harem of mind controlled hotties!
Jump into an alternate universe of Undertale taking place in Deltarune's Hometown.
Chara: the evil murdergirl is here and not ready for mind control.
(Female) Asriel: The prince(ess) of the underground has arrived, will she be able to outwit your malevolent machinations? (we both know the answer to that).
Frisk: The determined pacifist/murdergirl. This goody two shoes might be too innocent for her own good.
Clover: The yellow soul and protagonist of Undertale Yellow, spending half her time in the bar and the other half getting drunk.
Walkthrough:
https://www.mediafire.com/file/w9wcxiuhjccpdf7/Walkthrough.html/file
V0.03.1.2 (Mini Bugfix)
-Fixed bug preventing you from doing Asriel's LVL 3 quest if you did Frisk's Evil route. (I hope)
V0.03.1.1
-Fixed bug preventing you from doing Asriel's LVL 3 quest if you did Frisk's Evil route.
V0.03.1
-Fixed bug that prevented progress in Asriel's LVL 3 Quest (if you've experienced this bug, go back to the forrest and make sure you have 3 oranges.)
-Fixed the quest log not completing Chara's LVL 3 Quest when doing the pure evil route.
-Fixed some image issues.
V0.03
-Frisk LVL 3 Quest + Sex scene added.
-Chara LVL 3 Quest + Sex scene added.
-Clover LVL 3 Quest + Sex scene added.
-Asriel LVL 3 Quest + Sex scene added.
-Frisk Stripping scenes added.
-Chara Stripping scenes added.
-Clover Stripping scenes added.
-Asriel Stripping scenes added.
-1 Frisk + Asriel Special Sex scene added.
-1 Special Outfit for Chara added.
-Added dialogue when swapping followers.
-Added some new stuff to the spoiler part of the debug room.
-Added "Wear All" Option to Asriel's Storyshift and Maid outfit.
-Added a hint to Frisk's dialouge as to where the notebook is for her LVL 2 quest.
-Moved every transition to prevent accidentally going back to a previous room.
-Fixed bug preventing you from interacting with Asriel's librarby counter when she reached control LVL 2.
-Fixed bug that would initiate Asriel's LVL 2 quest talk more times than it was supposed to.
-Fixed a bug that allowed the player to begin Asriel's LVL 2 quest earlier than intended.
-Fixed being able to move during Asriel's LVL 1 event, thus softlocking you.
-Fixed some events giving the wrong followers.
-Fixed "Remove All" not removing Chara's StoryShift gloves.
-Fixed maid uniforms not appearing at the start of sex events when appropiate.
-Fixed Librarby Asriel breaking when having more than 20 knowlege.
V0.02.1
-Fixed bug preventing you from buying soda from sans when necessary.
-Fixed bug that would cancel Chara's interaction when talking to her.
-Fixed bug that would prevent you from exiting the clothing menu while having a quest active.
-Fixed a bug that would softlock you if you walked into the forrest with grapes after infecting the wine.
-Fixed some character images.
V0.02
-Asriel added (she will show up when you have at least Level 1 control over Frisk and Chara).
-Asriel LVL 1 Quest + Sex scene added.
-Asriel LVL 2 Quest + Sex scene added.
-Frisk LVL 2 Quest + Sex scene added.
-Chara LVL 2 Quest + Sex scene added.
-Clover LVL 2 Quest + Sex scene added.
-Quest log added.
-New menu added.
-Librarby added.
-Clothing Shop added.
-Title Screen added.
-Icon added.
-1 New Outfit for every character added.
-1 Special Outfit for Frisk and Asriel Added.
-Clothing Quest added.
-New options added to the Button Of Extra Options.
-Bunch of bugs fixed.
V0.01
-Chara LVL 1 Quest + Sex Scene added.
-Frisk LVL 1 Quest + Sex Scene added.
-Clover LVL 1 Quest + Sex Scene added.
-Better Clothing system added.
-Finished map (Unfortunately pretty barren right now).
-Made intro slightly better.
0.0.02
-Intro added (no new images unfortunately)
-Updated some of Chara's faces and option dialogue.
-Topless Chara sprite added.
-Added hide text box button (Ctrl/Alt).
-Fixed some wall clipping issues.
0.0.01
-POC Demo Release
I loved it, good artwork, very creative, a walktrhough to know if you missed any content instead of going crazy checking every corner of the game and a developer which actively looks at the forum and corrects everything that is bugged/glitched.
A mind control game? Great! I can't wait to see it. Keep up the hard work, and you'll get there. As it is right now, It's very broken and not really worth playing. Typically these kind of things should reach some level of completeness before you publish them. For example, finish the first town, complete the first act of the story, or introduce the characters. It's your game, you decide where that boundary is. Then you release updates that expand the game. It's bad show to publish a clearly broken project. But since it looks like you just started the game, I assume you just wanted to get the word out about your new project. I would recommend putting together a prototype to at least show off the mind control part of the game, instead of building out the world. I like world building too, but it eats up a lot of development time. Scope creep is a real problem, so I recomend making a list of all the important things you want to put in the game, then order them from most to least important. And try to start with a section of the game that is self-contained. Undertale started out as just the ruins, maybe start with something similar, then expand from there... GOOD LUCK and have fun! :D
So, i very rarely review things but decided to do so here because I've been making games with RPGMaker for 15+ years now and I know how important it is to get feedback.
Sadly I cannot provide much feedback here because there really is almost nothing to see. I don't have MZ because i decided to skip it and head into unite once it releases but what i see ingame looks to be fully RTP for now. Some Images that are in the folder but couldn't be accessed ingame as far as I can tell are nice but without context nothing more. The writing in the intro is not very engaging to be honest. there is absolutely no incentive to relate to the hero and with just a black screen for quite a bit of time it is not very graphic. I am not a native English speaker but even I noticed some minor spelling mistakes in the script.
The game might become interesting at some point but at the moment there simply is no game to review.
