You are but a poor peasant who has little oportunity in life. So one day you decide to travel to the magical lands of Mordrakor where fabeled treasure is said to be. However Mordrakor is also a dangerous land filled with magic. Will you be able to find fortune or will something more sinister befall you on your journey?
Kind of hard to judge based on what little you have here. Before releasing a game with an RPG style you should at least have a sample of the combat system worked out, additionally you should have the prices of the objects in the general store next to them if you are not going to have a "do you want to purchase this item?" dialogue option.
