Your parents are on a trip and you are home alone for a few days, you will spend your time with your friend Lucy. But your relationship with her will change depending on the choices you make and the path you take.
There is about 25 mins of content with 2 available path for now. I plan on making all the transformation paths follow the same events with diffrent options and results (depending on transformation path) for pc.
Thank you to all of you who liked, played and reviewed the game.
Your maid picture is adorable. I'm a huge maid fan. Excited to see how far this path will go :)
I recommend you clean up the first page before moving forward. The first impression is important in bringing in a reader, and when you misspell "chapter" before any actual content, followed by poor grammer in the actual text, it turns people away immediately.
Not that much content so far but really like how it is set up game play wise. The different attributes for each path is a nice touch
Good luck moving forward
I like what you've done so far. Your writing style flows nicely and the transformations you've hinted at seem like they could make for interesting variations to a central plot. I would certainly be interested in reading further updates. Good work so far!
Its really short right now but I like the story so far. Purple on a black background is hard to read would be nicer if you use a different colour for the mom's text. You should also consider opening a discussion thread.
