This is an updated review, the old one can be found under the line.
The main kink in this game is not what I had initially thought. After a wonderful community member reached out to me and pointed out something I realized how what I wanted was available within the game! So, you are able to transform your body further than I had first thought. I just went about it all wrong.
The story is well written, and I wish for the Succubus to be a bit more active, but I'm sure that will come in later editions. One thing of note that caught me off guard was just quickly your family was corrupted. I hope that as the game gets fleshed out that would something drawn out over a longer period of time.
The main kink in this game isn't what I'm really into. I love the idea of being slowly turned into a woman... But that's not really what happens here. You still have the male anatomy, plus breasts. I hope in the future it would be possible to fully become a female. From the way its written, it doesn't seem like it would be a hard change to make. Only a few of the scenes have the PC actually use their parts.
Aside from that, the story is well written, interesting, and has me wanting more. I suggest trying it, even if it may not be exactly what you're looking for.
I love the content and unlike the previous commment i like how you can skip of a lot of the "Sissyfication" and go straight to "Male Transformed Female". Not a fan of sissy so you did the right amount of skipping of all that male feminization. Keep it coming look forward to more content from Dad and at School.
A few suggestions:
i´d like to have the dead ends or WIP to be crossed out so that i don´t have to click them to find out
i´d make it a bit slower cause you end up having most of the content in a few weeks
Amazing start, very little content so far, but enough to give us a taste of whats to come ahead. I love the presentation, very clean and tastefully done.
The premise is interesting and promising. I wish the corruption and "sissyfication" was a bit slower and more fleshed out, pushing the boundaries slowly and steadily. I am eagerly waiting for future content. Good luck to the author.
For and alpha release, i'd rate it 4 out of 5.