Hey all!! 💖💖💖
So, this is my first game and it's finally at a place where I'm happy to share it, as in the spelling is all correct (probably) and the links work! The game is based on two of my favourite kinks: BBC and feminisation! So, I've spent the last few months constantly horny thinking of ideas and fantcies. I enjoyed the game "Yes Mr. Brown", so it's probs where I got some inspiration. I've left all the character descriptions relatively vague so you can imagine them for yourselves...
I'm a complete sissy (actually trans now), so this is actually just one of my biggest fantasies for you to all share in! 🤤 I really do hope you all enjoy it as much as I enjoyed making it!!
I do intend for the game to inculde mulitple pathways with multiple endings. But, for now, there is only one 😊. I've started the game kinda slow, wanting to build the scene and the characters, but once that happens you can embark on your becoming of a slut!!! 🤤🤤🤤
Also, mayybe think about supporting me! 😖😖 (and it'll really help me write):
I'd absolutely love any feedback, ideas, suggestions or anything else really. I can be a little shy but I really do like chatting and stuff!! 😅😅😅 message me on here, leave a comment, or find me on Kik...
Kik: OlivyOlivv
I'm not working on this game anymore. I've been going through a lot with transitioning and I've started a new project, having learnt a lot from this game.
Sooooo, basically, you're a white college student in America who's down on his luck. His best friend (only friend) invites him away for a week of fun, relaxation, intoxication... oh and a little corruption.. and that's it really.. x
You- You're probably best described as nondescript. There's nothing particularly special about you, other than your utter plainness. You find yourself quite submissive, eager to please the people around you.
Troy- You're one and only friend at college. Though he's popular, star football player, attractive and all that, he still makes time for you and is nice when no one else has been so far.
Tillie- A beautiful girl from the UK, like you. She's also lovely and caring, despite knowing exactly what she wants and she seems to get it..
Darrell- Tillie's bf. You've met before and he seems really fun and outgoing. He lifts everyones spirits and is generally the life of the party
Nicole- Both sexy and intense. You find Nicole to assert herself as the alpha of the girls, you'll just have to find ways to keep her happy
Jamal- Nicole's bf. He seems very serious, but only with you. With everyone else, he seems friendly and quick to laugh
Amber- A stereotypical blonde, with big boobs and a stunning figure. She's ditzy but that just adds to her charm.
Ty- Amber's bf. He's loud and excitable...
The game ends on day 3. There's only one way there, so once you reach it, that's probably all the content I've created..
This game has potential if it's ever turned into a game. It mostly reads like a kinetic novel right now.
Two problems:
1) Though it is the journey of an evolving sissy storyline, none of the images are. It frustrates me when people use hetero images for MM or Bi content. I am a fan of Blacked, so I love the content you include and it is awesome for the intended MF scenes. But, just once it would be nice to see some MM or MTrans interracial content. It exists.
2) This is basically the retelling of "White Boi Learns his Place" from Literotica. Some of the names are changed, but the first chapter is all here. It's likely that the Dev is Sissyashley4bbc, the writer who penned the story. If not, please give credit where it's due. If you are the author, own it. The story is pretty hot.
the beginning surely is there. (a little warning about the sounds would have been nice tho haha.) the feminisation feels a little rushed, and too voluntary. you would think ash would resist it. but he doesnt even try in the slightest. just meekly says "okay" to everything thats happening. he has been tricked into all of this happening, so a little more fight in him would be fitting in my opinion.
the pictures are great tho, the spelling errors are non existent and the grammer errors are minimal. doesnt bother me at all.
the story is certainly setup for multiple paths, that arent there, but you mentioned this already so cant deduct points on something you are aware off and working on.
im certainly following this game the next few months to see where it goes.
I hope you flesh out the other paths more next, I'm not really a fan of the whole "it doesn't matter what you choose, the same thing will happen anyway" kind of CYOA, as that makes choices rather useless.
When you run out of the room (in 2 possible moments), you run into Tilly, but that's currently a dead end, as there's no link to continue in that scene (both possible moments lead to the same scene of running into her).
And yeah, there are a lot of "double-click to edit this passage" moments.
I also hope there's going to be a non-sissification branch, to balance the game's content out more, right now the content is heavily going in the sissification and femdom direction, which isn't that bad, as long as there's also a way to avoid it, so your choice actually matters.
Great game, I'm also a big fan of Yes Mr Brown and this is a worthy successor. I hope there will be a save function in the next update.
I really enjoyed this game and I can't wait for more options and content keep it up
