My first game, please say in the comments if you liked it/what I should change
Sam is a lone student who happens to see a girl falling in the river. He saved her and so the story of Sam of Sparkleood begins.
The end can be different. During the story, you play as Sam and you decide (most) his actions.
Um, I stopped at the third page. The dialogs definitely need some formating.
Version .2
As the game continues to grow, it continues to get better. This update about doubled the content, and was a lot of fun. My only complaint is that there isnt more. Can hardly wait to see the next update to see how things start to unfold for our hero(ine).
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Version .1
Its a nice start. The game is only a few pages long, but its a fun read, and I was just starting to really enjoy it when I hit the end. Will be looking forward to seeing more, and will reserve final judgement until there's a bit more content.
Since there are two options to download the game, I did so with ease and comfort.
When I played the game, I tried to be moral for once and found it didn't get me very far.
Quite understandably, since one waits eagerly for the next updates, where -one assumes- bad things may happen to those who abused the poor victim.
The language could, to quote another review, like most games do with some work.
Most hobby game designers are no typists in real life and there is a surprising number of ways to type "also" when game building.
I like the start -and that's what we are talking about- for it's rarely used approach.
Old man Kleist had one of his noble ladies faint and being abused by her savior, but this is rarely seen as a start in the games here.
So all in all, I find the game quite interesting and wait for the transfer to Sparklewood.
If I'm guessing right about the game name.
The dialouge and spelling is pretty shabby. Definantly needs some work done in just about every department, even the plot and idea. The dialouge had no emotion backing it, and it was hardly believable; kinda a turnoff. Additionally, the situation and how it unfolds was pretty...awkward I guess. I didn't seem believable either. All of that nitty gritty aside, you clearly didn't proof read it nor edit this to a major degree, whether you did it at all I have no clue. Anyways, I hope the game gets better, I could be a pretty decent game if you shape it up.
I would like to try it, but I can't access firedrive where I'm at. Could you maybe host it on 4shared?
