Hey this is the first game I've made. It's not done. Not close, just wanted to try it out really and get some feedback. I've done the intro. Their may be typos and such. I miss letters sometimes. Please try it and tell me what you think. Constructive criticism and all that. Goes up to the point where you Pass out.
I have a little idea of where I wanna go with this plot but it's far from fully realised. So any ideas are welcome.
You're John Darak a 19 year old man living in London. You're just a normal kid going through, universirty until one unlucky (or lucky) night in a night club.
John Darak- You
Scotty
Clive & Mark
Jessie
Harley
shame it never got updated
would like to see finished up the story is exelent if a bit small so far but besides that not many games with vampire that are good this one is a rarity on this site and needs to be compleated
Excellent intro, you've managed to avoid most of the common mistakes such as trying to work on to many divergent paths or creating a setting too outlandish to suspend disbelief. I really like the idea of realizing just a intro, but having it in a close to finished condition. All in all I'm definitely looking forwards to seeing your future updates, if you can stay focused on this project it definitely has the potential to become one of the community favorites!
5/5 for the small amount of content currently available.
Interesting intro. Keep it up! :)
I really enjoyed this! Looking forward to more!
