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01/18/2015
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01/01/2018
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0.0.6
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Fallen Champion

Update 1st Dec 2017

Dear All, first of all, sorry for the LONG LONG hiatus. has been busy with work and study. (and Overwatch is not helping...)

The update is only until day 6, a very small update. I have try to put out some writting of key moments up until day 14. Therefore after day 7 are mostly point forms. Please don't expect much for this update.

I have to say, I am not very satisfy with this update. This is more of a story update. I did not do any coding, just try to figure out how 1 PATH of a story should be. Therefore I have not do any bug-fixing and troubleshooting. problems you found last time might still be around. Well, not 'might', 'will' still be around.

I found out i was too greedy to add in so many machanics into the story/code (dignity, will, attractiveness, manly, attitute). I might delete some of it in the future.

thank you for Icarue, who drew some pictures for me, and also thank you for JoeW, who did some writting for me. You gave me good idea on how another path with zenphir should be. 

I have a google sheet of all the important plot points written for myself to look into story easily. Right now just one path is on the sheet. Well, less than 1 path. Would you guys like to have a look and just doodle your ideas around?

 

 

 

 

You are Ficaus Goldhammer, a highborn. You arrived at Greenlake Town to attend contest to determine who is the best Champion. What happened next made you lost your masculinity. You have to find enought money to get your manhood back in 30 days. If not, you are trapped in your current body forever.

However, in order to get more money, you found yourself getting more and more feminine...

 

 

After lurking on this site for years, I finally decided to make a game last year! It took me about A YEAR to reach this far... oh god... i dread to think how long more i need to finish this project... Did I put the scope too big???

I am not a native English speaker. There will be A LOT of grammar mistake. Please forgive me if I have made any mistake. Please give me feedback. Don't hesitate. 

Enjoy the game!!! (which is a short one. for now)

 

Update 9th June 2015: small bug fixes

Update 7th March 2015: Oh God, I haven't even proof read the game. There must be a lot of bugs. Still need a lot of refinement... Officially, This is just a very little update of the game. I haven't manage to finish day 3...

Update 7th March 2015: Minor bug fixes, How do I update the newest version into the "Play in browser"? I deleted all other older versions...

Update 8th June:

Small update: Linear story line now get to Day 4.2 ish

Deleted developer mode, just play~ Spoilers alert, though, let me know in the comment if you want to separate developer mode (come with spoilers) or normal mode (no spoilers of unfinished part).

By the way, I am looking for artist to draw some sketches, Please let me know how much does it cost if you are interested~

 

Update 4th July 2015: Not a major update, just put in some thoughts in notes. 

Starts to put in some story editing by FBJ

update on notes (Spoilers!)

Kinda (just put in notes, not real story and dialogues) complete the day after the transformation.

 

Update 6 August 2015:

Oh god, it took me so much time to do the coding!

No detail story writting in this update, but written some more notes around.

Updated the neccessary semen intake and psycology impact to the game.

Haven't go through the goldcoin system and allocation, yet. 

All stats only updated until day 15. i will update to day 30 in next week or two.

Need help!!! need help on the rounding up number issue, see game for detail.

 

Update 16 August 2015:

  • Finally finish up writting the notes for the first story line!
  • Just notes, minimum coding and stuff. Haven't even test play yet.
  • Some previous game looping bug should be fixed. I haven't got the time to fix the time error bugs, though.
  • I will fix the problem for the loooooong numbers in next update. got a simple solution from a genious player! Thanks laevus!
  • Enjoy the main story line!
  • Hmmm... Anybody know how to put a text box in twine game, when player type something (suggestion to story line/ actual story writting), they can sent to us?

Update 26th Apr 2016,

Sorry Folks, for such long inactivity. This is a small update on story, Day 4 is complete.

Please use firefox to play, if not you will need to restart the whole game in one wrong move. (I haven't manage to port to to the newer version of twine yet.)

Please note:

  • Currently trying to fix the day cycle, i have noticed the day started again after day 1 ended. should be a small bug
  • i will ignore the path that the player not being friendly with Zenphir for now. will try to update that in the future.

 

Update 21 Dec 2016:

Holy Shit, my last update is almost 8 months ago???? time just flies... 

This is a rather small update. Day 5 finished. If you wish to see more content, you might want to wait for next update, though. 

after playing through i found it... short. darn. i need to put in more content to make it consistent... did some bug fixes though. to make the money and the day time more consistent. please let me know if the bugs come out. thanks folks


Latest Reviews - View All Reviews

Review by Taeyeon

Version reviewed: 0.0.6 on 08/18/2018


I really hope this project is still being developed, but it looks like it isn't. I really enjoyed what is currently in it, and hope to see more in the future if it continues.


Review by Magical_Kiro-chan

Version reviewed: 0.0.6 on 07/10/2018


Me likee this. I need updates, man! I want to see our tsuntsun protagonist finally fuck Zanphir! (Also, a wolf-man named Zanphir- are you a Nanoha fan by any chance?)

One thing I'd like to say is that you should get a proofreader. The game as it is isn't unreadable, but it would still be easier on the eyes if someone corrected its grammar.


Review by chrisx

Version reviewed: 0.0.6 on 02/24/2018


next build plzz create a small save system, best and probably easiest for u would b somehow save to file to our hard drive, gives muiltiple saves without having to create a system for multiple saves :) just a way to continue from where saved and what has been done and happened in 1 save tho ik that becomes the more difficult part :/


Review by Jeux

Version reviewed: 0.0.6 on 02/23/2018


Very strong potential. And a very good start.

 

 


Review by Vire

Version reviewed: 0.0.6 on 01/03/2018


I see strong potential in this game and I'm more than willing to help with grammar if you're still looking for assistants.

 

As per criticism I saw;

  • Sequences where the player doesn't do anything for like 5 clicks at a time, makes sense in the prologue but slows the game’s pacing. Though if you wish to go for more of a set narrative, then I’d suggest finding a way to condense the text walls so as to place the transitions in one regular spot.
  • Links from the mirror page seem unnecessary, especially since you give us a description on that page. Make farm the only place you can work at first, city exploration is a plus.
  • It's too early to give spoilers (let alone designer notes) for locations that aren't in the game yet, basically there are too many places that say you "walked out of the store".

 

Now onto compliments;

  • Bull and Wolf forms could be interesting if explored in the future especially if the character debates using them and sees consequences for doing so.
  • The "fall from grace" narrative is cool and I think his playboy past should play a bigger role on his psyche in the future (especially if you want to show him going deeper into decline).
  • Keeping the current month deadline is good for this point in the development, but please extend in future builds.
  • I also think the set timeline is good, especially if each location gets one for itself.
  • Though I have complained about it, I think you could really work the city exploration angle if you wanted.

 

Again I think you have a good game, and these points I've listed are why I want to help. - Thanks for reading.


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