I quite enjoyed this interactive story. Writing is very good, characters you interact with are varied and most have a bit of personality to them. The situations you can find yourself in aren't too badly railroaded by your choices and transformations that can happen to your avatar are both choice and situation dependent to the point that you have a little influence in how much your character is affected. Images are used in the game sparingly but effectively for your transformations, which are all within reason (no hyper here).
I've looked at the code and it's quite strong; I wasn't able to cause any bug errors on this final update.
Really all of your games are phenomenal and this one is even more incredible. Even though the actual game time is short, there's so many different branching routes and events that are magnificently written, it's easily one of the best games of its kind out there. I love the images that are already in the game and would've liked more, but thats just me wanting the cherry on the icing. I'm really looking forward to what you come up with next!!!
Finally I was waiting for this update where they added the graphics that was missing in the game.
Now I feel that this a complete game i would rate it 8-9/10
Ps The uniforms are still broken oops
very hot writing, A+
the character appearance design is sexy and well done, but this is mostly a story with decisions leading different routes, made me replay it a different way, if you dont mind reading give it a try its hot!
Will you ever do a walkthrough, so people can find all the different endings?