Maybe my standards are too high but I wouldn't call this game very good. At all.
What story there is doesn't have a lot of pull. Yes, it's linear, but linear doesn't necessarily mean bad. What makes it bad is that it's just not a very good story; the sex isn't really justified. "Well", you might say, "a romp doesn't have to be logical." True, but a romp needs to have fantastic sex scenes to make up for it, which brings me to...
The writing, which, overall, sits at the lower end of mediocre, both in terms of quality and quantity - finding an action or scene that's described with more than one sentence or half a paragraph is a rare occurence. Even the individual parts of this short review are longer than most of what the game gives back to you, and I'm sure the entirety of what I'm writing here will exceed the length of the longest scene in the game by quite a bit. My point is that there just aren't enough details to make the story engaging or locations interesting; and the sex scenes suffer immensely as a result of that, making them short, boring and, thanks to a lack of character development and/or minimal character exposition, feel very samey.
As for the pictures, they are a strange mix of porn stills and black & white portraits of actors (partially dressed up as movie characters) and regular people from the first half of the 20th century. "Why", you ask? I haven't got the faintest idea. There certainly doesn't seem to be any justification for it, other than an aesthetic choice. And it would be fine if those portraits didn't make the porn pics and colored character models look out of place.
If you are curious about it, go for it, you should be done with it in less than half an hour, even if you read everything carefully and try to find most endings, but you should absolutely ignore the other reviews here because they do not represent what the game is actually like.
I'm all for motivating game authors to keep going and get better at it but lying to them about blatant issues that hugely detract from the quality doesn't help anybody.
If nothing else, please, for the love of god, make the individual scenes longer and pay a lot more attention to details. As it stands, I would rate this game with a 4/10 at most - don't know where the other reviwers 8/10 came from.
The game features one transformation early on and features lots of sex. It was fun finding all the endings, easily an 8/10 as it stands now. If it continues to see updates it could very easily become one of the best non life sims on this site. Great work!
I noticed a few spelling errors while going through the story, but nothing severe. The game is quite straightforward at this point and there isn't any transformations past the first one, but the mind manipulation element is interesting.
If your story ends up having transformations in it as part of branching pathways/possible endings that would be a plus, but if that isn't what you had in mind then that's alright and we'll see what you finish with.
I look forward to further updates.
Linear but a really good start !! thanks, waiting for more :)
Currently very linear story. Will keep an eye on it and hope for more choices.