Pretty good overall except for the writing, Expect lots of transgendered woman, trap-girl and transexual persons
Given that there is so little game there I can't really give a proper review. It looks like there is the groundwork for a good selection of choices and paths even if the current snippet is quite the railroad. I enjoyed the Rory storyline the best of what was there and I look forward to the possibilites of that relationship.
I really like the opening of the game and hope you will continue working on it.
1. You really should change the name as there already is a game out with a similar name.
2. The test is placed to far in the middle for me. COuld it be moved more to the rigth?
3. Some text is hard to read (Blue text on black background). Would be better to user brigther text colors.
4. Currently, the game seems to be a little bit too linear. The options are more pseudo-actions. That should change once the content grows bigger.
Oops, posted on the wrong game. >.<
This is a intteractive story. I really enjoyed the path that it is taking, but i would as it was suggest in another review to change the time to something different. I would love to see where to take this story.
I canot possibly see this as a game more like interactive story with bit of variation. Why? Because it does not mather what you do the story railroads you to whore ourself out without ANY strugling at all. And your stats at this point are prety mutch meaning less. It gives the wibe that in your term feminization has to turn yourself in to a depraved whore overnight. Also this kind of start will make the gaming part boring.
Nice start for a story but thats all.
If possible I'd advise you to change the game title. Unfortunately there's already a very popular game called Newlife, and existance of this game will cause some confusion. Some might think that you're trying to leech off another game's popularity.