This game seems really promising, I couldn't find too many different paths.
I like the story so far. Hope we'll get to find out more about the Device. I've got tons of questions that I'm hoping will get answered in future updates.
Those flashing indicators on the Device screen seem to beg me to touch them. It'd be super cool if clicking on them actually caused the changes.
The first time I read through the story I quit when I got to the first PLACEHOLDER tag as I mistakenly thought that was the end of content. I'm guessing those are meant to be Image Placeholders.
Nice writing, waiting for more to come.
I'm so glad someone's mentioned them, it took quite a lot of work and I was quite pleased with how they looked!
Nice story so far. Like where it's going. The CSS tables are lovely.
Loving this so far, looking forward to more!
i good start, but need a lot of work
There is essentially nothing here, i'd suggest waiting a few updates before giving it a go. That said it looks like it's going to be pretty good eventually, and i hope the author continues with this.
Definitely want to see more of this, I really enjoy the direction the story is going. The only real issue I would have is that there isn't a lot of content so far.
The writing is not bad
the idea is ok
nothing more or less
The writing is good but remember this is very early in development so you will be left wanting more. Well worth taking a look. The author has done a good job proof reading and there aren't a ton of spelling grammatical errors. I am really looking forward to the next update.