Endangered (In Progress Name)

Author: Leecrimson
Version: 0.1.1
Last Updated: 2017-08-15 12:05:07


Review by jcj
Version reviewed: 0.1.1 on 2017-08-16 11:10:58

Nice start! Still a lot to progress, but expected being a 0.1.

Just one thing, it'd be nice if there was a message when there's no more content, or some mark to tell there is a dead end. Otherwise, good work.

Keep it up!


Review by darkmastery24
Version reviewed: 0.1.1 on 2017-08-16 04:39:52

Really like the concept. hope to see this fleshed out.


Review by fixsxd
Version reviewed: 0.1.1 on 2017-08-15 19:02:31

Hi

Its a straight forward start.

Nothing more


Review by Pekachews
Version reviewed: 0.1 on 2017-08-15 05:56:09

Missing a lot of content right now, that's all I can really say. If I were the author I would learn how to use TwineScript because there are some events that repeat (e.g. the transformation scene in the bedroom - you can go back and back to it every time). Keep on the grind though, you won't get anywhere if you don't put the work in :)


Review by rawclash
Version reviewed: 0.1 on 2017-08-15 04:53:17

Nice start keep going