Nice start! Still a lot to progress, but expected being a 0.1.
Just one thing, it'd be nice if there was a message when there's no more content, or some mark to tell there is a dead end. Otherwise, good work.
Keep it up!
Really like the concept. hope to see this fleshed out.
Its a straight forward start.
Missing a lot of content right now, that's all I can really say. If I were the author I would learn how to use TwineScript because there are some events that repeat (e.g. the transformation scene in the bedroom - you can go back and back to it every time). Keep on the grind though, you won't get anywhere if you don't put the work in :)
Nice start keep going