This story oozes with style, and is a fun read - I hope it's fun to work on for the author, since I hope it keeps getting updated!
First I want to thank the Author for the game, One of the few game where your MC can become more manly and can transform others.
I am really into that and sadly most of the game on the site are M2F or MC being forced to be a sissy. Those games are fine but I really like when I can transform others and my character is Dominant. So far the game is good. I hope you will continue to update it and maybe add some images if you feel that's okay.
Inform 7 is not the most friendly game client and it assumes the players do know how to type instead of just click click click. This game does extremely well to introduce the VERBS menu to kick-start its player. The Text-UI looks neat.
That said, the game at this stage lacks interesting elements to make people stay. F2M isn't exactly a popular topic. Going through conversation isn't exactly a loved element. Small tasks and opening maps neither. So there was little I could do before I got stuck (after pistol, F2M, watches, shirt, pants and boots).
I know it is only version 0.1 so I am going to keep my fingers cross. Please keep up with the good work.
PS> Here is a little tip for anyone who wants to try it out. You start off in the town with seven directions accessible. The one to the North is where the story starts, so you may as well explore the other six directions (buildings) before you head off.