It's a fresh and innovative idea, and the use of different kinds of sprites and animation between the, currently, two stories is clever. I'll look forward to see what the future holds for this work.
good so far! Wish at least 1 book was finished, but good teaser!
*Books I haven't read
A good start. Love the idea and the excution is pretty soild. Would love to have seen more of one story than a bit of two but they are good. Don't know about altering Kafka though.