Queen's Quest

Author: Espera
Version: 1.0
Last Updated: 2018-10-02 16:42:03

Review by Leymoon
Version reviewed: 1.0 on 2018-10-04 01:28:31

Quick little TF game with a couple different short paths and a somewhat variable end depending on which one you chose.

...however, I hope for certain this will get some looking over and fixing - as it is it's riddled with typos (mostly mis-ordered letters) but also a few tag errors and even at least two broken choices. From what it seems, there has been no fixing at all since a lot of the errors were there already in the release back in April. Normally I would not make a fuss about just a typo or three, but the amount is in the dozens, and that gets bothersome while reading after a while.

Review by AionJackal
Version reviewed: 0.3.2 on 2018-04-18 13:01:25

In one play throug I found only 3 typos. Two of the typos are just letters out of order; adn, teh; and one was spacing; o fpleasre. I'm interested to see how the story continues.

Review by DeusUmbra
Version reviewed: 0.3.2 on 2018-04-11 00:22:36

This game has potential. The area's are well written ehough to give a good mental image on where you currently are, the lewd scenes are varried and (just like the enviroments) are well written enough to give a good lewd mental images, and not much typos exist (besides a few, but they didn't detrace me from the game itself).

One thing that would vastly improve the game would be a constant "Appearence" option to show the current state of the protaginast (Khana), and details on what kinds of transformations she went through.

For a first submission, it has a lot of potential! Kudos to the author!