Quick little TF game with a couple different short paths and a somewhat variable end depending on which one you chose.
...however, I hope for certain this will get some looking over and fixing - as it is it's riddled with typos (mostly mis-ordered letters) but also a few tag errors and even at least two broken choices. From what it seems, there has been no fixing at all since a lot of the errors were there already in the release back in April. Normally I would not make a fuss about just a typo or three, but the amount is in the dozens, and that gets bothersome while reading after a while.
In one play throug I found only 3 typos. Two of the typos are just letters out of order; adn, teh; and one was spacing; o fpleasre. I'm interested to see how the story continues.
This game has potential. The area's are well written ehough to give a good mental image on where you currently are, the lewd scenes are varried and (just like the enviroments) are well written enough to give a good lewd mental images, and not much typos exist (besides a few, but they didn't detrace me from the game itself).
One thing that would vastly improve the game would be a constant "Appearence" option to show the current state of the protaginast (Khana), and details on what kinds of transformations she went through.
For a first submission, it has a lot of potential! Kudos to the author!