I played this a while ago in the HTML version and actually kind of liked it. I have no idea why it's now in RPG Maker, and it seems to have even less content than it had in the html version.
The art's also not very good imo and the town structure doesn't even exist so why was this even changed from html to rpgmaker?
Definitely not the best engine for RPG combat, but since this one is more about writing than about fighting this works better than alternatives would.
So far there's only “technical” images here. A dungeon map, skill tree images etc. All content is text-only.
The writing gave me a distinct impression that author would make a great secondary writer, but not much of a lead writer.
Various character interactions and side quest are written about as well as one could wish for. I dare say perfectly. (Or at least that's my opinion)
However plot is nowhere to be seen. The whole thing reads as a slice of life about an adventurer with nothing but his day-to-day questing.
Witch would be ok, I guess, if we had an MC with a personality.
We don't. That's nowhere to be seen either.
His reason for wanting to be an adventurer so badly? Not explained.
Closest thing we have to that is a mention of him running out of money.
Which should stop being an issue (plot-wise at least) as soon as he's good enough to slay lizard-men. (game-play-wise, strangely enough, as soon as you stop getting exp from lizradmen you also stop collecting money from them, go figure)
Without a well-defined reason to drive those actions of his I just can't mentally place him inside this slice of life story. “I couldn't become a warrior but I've been told I could become a sissy sorceress, so let's do that, because why not?” is what his “story” reads like. Either I just don't “get” willing subs, or this is not a well written one.
What's baffling is that none of this applies to any secondary characters. Their motivations and positions are pretty darn clear and well-written, only MC is out of place in his own story.
So what I'm getting at is this – if you are dead-set on lead-writing your own projects, work on being able to hold your content together with something. You need either stronger character aspect to work the character development angle, or an interesting plot to work the plot angle. Ideally both.
And if not, join with someone who can already do the above.
As it's is it's still worth a read, but …
If your game HAD the above it would be the the best piece of writing on this whole f-ing site (imho).
P.S. This is based on 0.6.11
Let me start off by saying... when I first played this a long long time ago, I hated it! Mostly bc, while it was kinda interesting, there was nothing there for so very very long.
That being said, decided to pick it up again, and it's become quite a good game for spending an hour or so! Still very much prefer RPGMaker and RAGS, but can still definitely appreciate what this game brings to the table. Fave thing would have to be the cursed outfit tho, was fun to let it change my character! Definitely liking and subscribing!
Not much content, but what's there is solid.
good game so far, with a novel battle system. The leveling shows promise but is both clunky and limited. So far it is mostly a feminization game that is moving (possibly) toward full tf. The tf has yet to be fully implemented. It will be interesting to see where it ends up.
Edit for .6.7 from .5.0: Content is added regularly and there is not much yet, but we have had our first major addition which does not include any new TF content. It works really well for the story and hs been utilized somewhat to explore some of the changes the MC has undergone and how those affect them. I think the author could explore that side more. With this expansion of the stories scope I am nuch more excited to seeing new TF content in future updates. I feel like it will now be more than just a click and fap game even though it works very well for that now.
Great game with frequent updates. I love the progressive feminization and I would love to see that start manifesting more and more as the game progresses. A small amount of appearance customization might be nice, but the game is solid already. Keep on doing what you're doing.
It is a linear story, so far, that well chopped into bits and pieces like a game. I have to admit that the result looks great so far... I like the stat... thou they are not doing anything right now. Looking for the future updates.
Love it so far, keep up the good work! Adding images in the future would be awesome
Love what little there is . Very fun. Cant wait for more... So please make more =)
this game has a decent concept, though the femization from the lizaardman fails, made you eventually untouchable by their attacks. you may want to rework your defense values because losing to a monster over and over again should not make you stronger than them,
It's a pretty good start. It's a fun enough start, but there's not much. The proof will be in the updates.
Very interesting story, loving it so far! Game mechanics are simple but very well done. Some spelling and grammar errors (lots of "your"s when they should be "you're"s). Would love an option to be able to choose whether you're wearing boy or gorl clothes. Can't wait for more!
Created an Account just to the review this.
The magic system is really too clever and I loved how picking a different element cause both the previous and selected element to combine their attributes.
Honestly look forward to the more dialogue and the eventual story.
Also kinda wish Beatrice would have said SOMETHING about the red panties before the MC whips out their dick.
Great start so far.
I do feel images would add some immersion to the story, though I can see trying to find images for this type of story to be difficult considering it revolves around fantasy and what not.
Perhaps if you were an artist, you could draw some images or pictures for this story? Or maybe even get another artist to do it.
If you can't though, text only is definitely still acceptable by me and I'd assume lots of people. Perhaps find a unique way to structure your story though. This includes an interesting side bar, icons, etc.
I see lots of potential in this, so I encourage you to update whenever possible. I see many promising games such as this one just disappear due to no updates and I hope that you keep active with this game.
Like it so far can't wait for updates
Good story, needs more content but has good potential.
Subnote: Can I get an option to to increase boobs over increase butt size, ie save my ass but leave the rest exposed.
It's a good start, definitely will be keeping an eye on this to see how it progresses. Definitely has a feel of games like magical camp and many of the M2F magical girl games on dlsite/dmm. Hoping that it takes a slightly unique direction to make it stand out, but even if it doesnt it's well written so far which should still make it enjoyable reduardless. Only issue (and I use the term loosly) I have is is that you have it tagged for planned content/themes, not current ones, but that's a pretty standard gripe I have about games on this site.
Bug: Ice->Lightning throws an (ignorable) error in combat
Text only games are a turn off or me, the story seems pretty well written but I need the images to really dive into the story, hope in a future update you could add some images, that would improve the game in my opinion, but still, great texting!
It would be nice to have a forum topic for this but I thought I would add some input due to seeing promise with this html game. It is an actual game rather than a CYOA which is a plus for me. It has simple and straight-forward mechanics that are easy to pick up. I'm still exploring the content at this time to see what all I can do but, it appears to have some forethought put into the magic system. Casting spells in different orders can actually lead to different battle effects triggering on a turn. Try ice and fire or ice and lightning for instance. Fire and lightning are also a good matchup.
I did notice a few error blurbs during combat, however, nothing actually stops your gameplay. This is all a very good sign because I'm accustomed to sugarcube/twine games hitting deadends in games like this. You should keep going with this and try to bring the game to completion. It would be nice to have more games like this completed in the format you are using.
This has potential. I enjoyed what was there, the hints at what's to come are intriguing, and it's quite well-written. Looking forward to the next update.