Unfinished Business

Author: Dedegaru2
Version: 0.1.8
Last Updated: 2019-02-22 11:28:04


Review by Reiruu
Version reviewed: 0.1.0 on 2019-01-29 20:25:37

I have to agree with the bottom post here. While the game has potential, yes, the beginning is soooooooooooo boring. You can't do anything and when you FINALLY can do stuff, you can do maybe 2 things before you're too drained and you have to rest until Sarah comes home from work because... of course you can't do *ANYTHING* when she's out of the house.


Review by nyctelios
Version reviewed: 0.1.0 on 2019-01-29 16:17:11

This could be an AMAZING game.   So many options could be put into this game.   You could corrupt the female to be a Dom or a Sub.  Causing her to dress differntly accordly to the path you pick.  Same could be for the guy where he could be Dom, a simple sub or even give into becoming a sissy.  You can add in F/M, F/F/M, F/M/M, F/F, M/M, Sissy/F, Sissy/M  it is just endless.  Other people could be added into the game where the more they visit the more they can be corrupted.  

 

Things could be added like a priest or/add nun were you could hide while they are there or try to corrupt them as well.  But be careful for if you try and fail you could end up banished (Game Over)

 

As for now there is not much in the game but it is early and I would keep an eye out on this one.


Review by Noknet
Version reviewed: 0.1.0 on 2019-01-29 15:17:48

It has potential, but it gets stuck in the same loop that a lot of these games get stuck in (day one, day two, day three...).  Fortunately, since you're a ghost, you don't have to worry about eating or any of the other mundane aspects of life that some games force you to get involved in, BUT your ghost only has so much energy, so it still needs to sleep (meditate) in order to be strong enough to do anything.  Then it's back to the basement to meditate again.  Ho hum.