An enjoyable start. The premise lends itself well to having lots of things to do in the future. Being tasked with "stealing hearts" provides good opportunities for character development. The writing was devoid of grammar or spelling errors, which is always good to see. There are still things I cannot comment on, like the gameplay balance, as there simply isn't enough there to see yet. Perhaps my one criticism I can give right now is that I would like to see more differentiation between the difference speakers. It's not a critical issue, mind you, but a wider variety of colors would have you keep track of who is who easier.
Really solid game / intro. Very curious what the game will be like now that it's coming into a (I suspect) less linear portion.