The comments re:Patreon are valid. It's consider very poor form to make the game available through Patreon before it's beyond the Concept stage.
That said, no one has to contribute, and the game is available from the Patreon site without becoming a patron. If you feel inclined to the give it a shot for evaluation, go right ahead.
As for the game itself, it's very bare bones. Two to three pages, tops. Nothing to write home about just yet. Personally, I'm putting it on the "ignore until there's a lot more content" shelf.
Putting out a first game WITH patreon shows us players/gamers one thing: ye don't care enough about games & just want to get money from people. Not a good idea for a first game upload. (ye should get one or two games out there & get interest in your games BEFORE doing a patreon)
Concept with patreon :) Sorry, I wont be gentle