I like what you've written so far. Hope you'll keep at it.
Promising start but not really much there yet.
But this game is definetly worth to keep an eye on ;)
Some little notes:
Please keep up working ... I'm looking forward to the next updates
Promising start - there‘s not much to go on at this stage of the game but this is one I’ll be keeping an eye on with later updates.
Not much more than an introduction and a premise at the moment, but it certainly has potential.