The Book of Consequences

Author: bellacorsen
Version: 1.0.0
Last Updated: 2019-11-06 13:24:36

Review by Zerato2431
Version reviewed: 1.0.0 on 2019-11-07 22:53:01

It is WAY too short to feel like the "endings" were meaningful.


I feel like saying anything more would spoil what little is in the game. I really think it would need to be expanded upon significantly before this can be considered anything more than "an introduction".

Review by JaradLichLord
Version reviewed: 1.0.0 on 2019-11-07 02:10:56

Its short. No real tf content and definitely unfinished. I would change the designation of the version from 1.0.0 to something along the lines of 0.1.0. There are 3 "branches" so far with two of those  branches containing "sub paths". I put "sub paths" and "branches" in quotations as they are chocies which as of yet fail to lead to any difference in content other than where the (Highlight text for spoiler)attack occurs which leads to (Highlight text for spoiler) the begining of your rape. Each path and every decision has no other effect on outcome as of yet. This is shaping up to be another story rather than a game.

Next the immage associated with the suffer hyperlink does not display an image but rather an instruction to view the image at an outside location namely the website of origin.

2/5 stars. this is a promising premise if the author figures out how to writebranching paths.