If I have to be Isekaid then I may as well be the Hero!..ine

Author: Arty
Version: 0.0.1a
Last Updated: 2019-11-11 17:47:47


Review by Viser3
Version reviewed: 0.0.1a on 2019-11-19 23:24:08

Great start! I liked all the customization for wand, I am excited to see how it turned out. The overall tone of the game is good and there is a steady drip of tf related events that keep me interested in more than just the plot. Oh and the combat so far feels good. Keeping the balance of plot, combat and uhh... stimulation is not easy in projects like this but so far your creation is high on my list of games that I will be lurking and cheering for. Art style is good and your choice of a pov shot for a certain event was a very good decision. Keep this up and you will be on par with the other great rpg's on this site, maybe even better.

 

Just a suggestion here, feel free to ignore it this because its just a personal preference. The daily choices system in games is not interesting or fun to me. If you can find a way to enhance that experience or do something with it that hasnt been done before it would really make this game stand out from the rest. It feels like an unnecessary break in plot progression and it doesnt impact the experience like plot, combat or stimulation. Maybe every time the player completes a "chore" something interesting should happen to incentivise the player for more than just a stat boost... stimulation would be my go to for that but its just my biased opinion ♥


Review by Eschation
Version reviewed: 0.0.1a on 2019-11-15 13:44:29

Excellent start. Biggest issue for me right now is the lack of direction after the first day at school. Using the quest system to give an indication of what to do would be good... even if you told the player via an NPC.

Oh, as a side note, I don't think the math triangle question provides enough information to give a definitive answer.


Review by spadge
Version reviewed: 0.0.1a on 2019-11-12 20:56:08

Wow!  If this is a learning project I can't wait to see what you do when you've learned!  It's a fantastic start, good characters, interesting if familiar premise and excellent execution.  Given time I see no reason at all why this can't stand shoulder to shoulder with the excellent rpg maker games you aspire to.  My only disappointment was that it ended.


Review by bajiman
Version reviewed: 0.0.1a on 2019-11-12 16:09:17

Ohhhh.......

That's a good start.

(especially referencing to Little Bitch Academia, Afterlife, Magical Camp, Timeless Pantheon)

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And I love those you're referencing to.

Good start.

REALLY!

 

(hint: if u like any of those mentioned...go and give it a try!)

(and now hurry up and give us mooooooooorrrrrrrrreeeeee!(plz(prettyplease?)!))


Review by Onedrift
Version reviewed: 0.0.1 on 2019-11-11 14:39:01

Really liking how this starts, great world building that explains some of the choices the MC doesn't really have!


Review by willowsimmons1
Version reviewed: 0.0.1 on 2019-11-11 04:24:42

This is a pretty good start. It is similar to the games the author refers to without being just a copy. I hope to see more progress!