Great concept, great pacing. I love the sissification/castration stuff. My only complaint is that it ends too early!
this definitely isnt bad. i like the writing aside from a thing thats just a personal turnoff. that thing is the forced castration. perhaps theres a way around it that i havent discovered, but its a thing that totally kills my enjoyment anytime its mentioned again through the story. that wouldn't be a problem if i could advance the story in any meaningful way before then or get them back after but again i dont know a way to do that. other than that its good stuff and excellent feminization.
I like the concept and what is here is written very well. Eagerly awaiting more content!
Latest update, many bugs have been introduced with the new content. Literally error flags everywhere once you get to the new content, did you even give this a run through before you posted it???
I thuoght it was very well written and a fun premise.
Great game thus far. The only thing from my opinion to make it better would be to add pictures.
Driven by a creative and fun concept and quality writing. Really enjoyed this for a start to the story, and I look forward to the next section :)
Fantastic game, hope you continue
OMG this concept looks awesome, you HAVE TO continue working on this game
After all, you just took my review virginity :D
If this is you learning how to make a game, then by all means keep learning because this is a very good start.
What a fun little game. A little linear but still enjoyable. i look forward to more.