There's not a ton here at the moment, so judging it is a bit tentative. The art style is great. The women are all appealing to look at, even just the dialogue images. It's got promise. However the dialogue is kind of bulky and slogs a bit. There's one bit at the start where the character slowly discusses some of their backstory walking step by step. You have no control and just sort of sit through it. There's a few scenes like that, where something that should take thirty seconds at the max drags on for minutes. Most concerning, at the moment the player really doesn't have much personal agency. The short amount we're given basically blocks off routes we might take until we find the 'right' one. An example is finding extra money. Despite being told you'll be paid, any cash for smuggling in goods (Which is a concept I like, btw) has to be earned outside. You're given two options: Do the nurse's cleaning or do the Boss's paperwork. But, this soon proves to not be a choice after all, as one of the options is rapidly taken off the table.
I'd agree taht this game has promise, and I for one would like to see some of these girls with their clothes on the floor. But at the moment it's not very engaging and is even a little boring. Early days, though. there's still time for improvement.
Very promissing and entertaining game. I love how you go about the corruption and such.
I do have a few things you could add to make it better:
In the game you get relationship levelups, but you have no menu to see how far you are. Maybe add it in the menu that you can see how far you are.
At a certain point some actions do not seem to give any result, but it is never explained why or how to go about it.
For the rest great game, keep up the good work.