A little better than I was expecting, definitely hoping to see more of this in the future.
Oh man, I have to say, this was such a delight to read. Beautifully written, with an interesting story as of yet. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for more!
There were few typo's throughout it, with the most glaring one being a lower case 'i' when it needed to be an upper case. Aside from that, the story is fairly short, but as mentioned earlier, it's a delight to read.
So far it's good, I especially appreciate the great writing. I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next.
A very good and a nice addition to the X-Change games.
A promising start