It's an interesting idea, but the writing is a bit rambling and...honestly I have no idea how anyone is supposed to figure out some of the rather random passwords thrown at you time and time again in this. Than there's the whole Sally sequence which I lost 3 times in a row because I didn't scroll down the page fast enough I dunno...feels like it needs some tweaking as a lot of it is just...frustrating instead of fun.
Interesting take, and a very breaking the xTh wall style, featuring a foul potty-mouthed protagonist. Have to keep tabs on this one.
Got a slick style and a sexy subject matter. Love to see more!
Quite interesting story. I look forward to seeing where this one will go. Tried both paths, quick end to the first and potiential with the 2nd. Keep up the good work. I'll be keeping an eye out.
Has a lot of potentional the text isn't overwhelming and the visuals are very nice to look at. Definitely a 0.0.1a type of build though, there's very little to actually do. Keep an eye on this one.