slightly longer version:
Graphics (wait, we're here for graphics?) 6,5/10 "play's to the engine's strong side with graphics however some scenes could use some refinement, however i hope that does not happen before the rest of the game is done, so hopefully stick with current level of detail and such."
Story (now there's the bread and butter!) 8,5/10 "Simple to understand, every twist and turn of the story was interesting"
Spelling (as is tradition, nazi dogs will compain here) 6/10 could use more in way of flavor to the text and there's a few spelling mistakes here and there however nothing compared to many other i've seen"
Choice (if story is bread and butter then i guess this is desert) 9/10 "there's 2 types at play, firstly player choice that subtly determines what content you want to watch/read/etc, meaning multiple paths that goes back to main branch, then there's multiple paths that open options in the future, while i don't know for certain if there's the latter yet, there is referances to it being a thing in the text"
All in all "had a fun time and i'd love to see more, there's definitely talent here, but more then that it seems you are working smart instead of hard...relatively speaking, anyway keep up the good work and i hope to see more."
The art assets look good. So there's that.
Unfortunately, this a slow burn sort of game featuring writing by someone who is not comfortable writing in English. I.e. there's a lot of text and a lot of it barely makes any sense. If the author gets some assistance in that regard, it might turn out pretty good.
Very good start! U have all resources for make are great game! Good luck, im wait for the next update :)
So I really like the concept and you seemed to have done a pretty good job with the images, but the writing is really rough. I fully get that English might not be your primary language, and that is prefectly fine, but I would greatly suggest getting someone to proof read for you.