Bimbo Bus

Author: sis_jenny
Version: 0.0.3
Last Updated: 2020-09-05 09:59:28

Review by willnotwork
Version reviewed: 0.0.3 on 2020-09-07 22:25:47

Fast and cute, it needs more content here, but the core loop is pretty solid. I also like the fate patch for the protagonist? character. Not to spoil things for the spoiler unready, but there may be some karmic reward for the mind controller with discretion.

Review by max02
Version reviewed: 0.0.3 on 2020-09-06 04:32:06


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Medium Commands
Make Sophie a little less self-assured
Make Sophie sound like an idiot
Suggest that Sophie starts bringing you coffee
Suggest that Sophie addresses you more formally




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Amber regretfully arrests you for real this time.

You should have been more careful, especially after the massive favour she did for you by giving you a second chance.

Game Over.

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You raised too much suspicion and somebody contacted the authorities.

You were justifiably arrested for your crimes, and spent a lot of time in prison.

Game Over.

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Review by Aggressive Zone
Version reviewed: 0.0.3 on 2020-09-05 19:45:06

Fun little game,

Seems like it has good potential.

Looking forward for improvements for sure.

Ill keep an eye on this and give a proper review once its further into its development

Review by blehtastic
Version reviewed: 0.0.3 on 2020-09-05 13:56:02

I played around with this last night. Right now it's a really simple premise, which could be to its advantage. There's not really a plot or even really many gameplay mechanics, but there's something here that can be built on. But there's tons of glitches like characters straight up disappearing, options that should be unlocked being locked. Also, the visuals are pretty lackluster for the one character you can actually mess with fully. It's a good base for a game but It's hardly even playable right now. This isn't really the fault of the author considering it's only at version 0.0.3, but I'm still going to point it out. 

Review by Volendi
Version reviewed: 0.0.2 on 2020-09-05 02:49:12

Very unfinished, and with a few quirks that will get ironed out... 

Overall tho, I like the idea, and where it is headed!

Gameplay is good, if a bit linear.  No alternate "if this, not that" kind of choices yet, with the exception of one.  That choice is spoilers and doesn't go anywhere yet anyways.

Love it tho!  Refreshing change of pace from what's been on here recently!