I like the game, it is very linear so far and there is only one chapter of content, but the story is quite intriguing.
For a long time I haven't seen a game with such a promising start, it's really good and left an immense desire to see the sequel,
My congratulations until now.
I'm Brazilian, so I'm sorry for any language errors.
Hi, you wanted feedback on the text and how readable it is. In my opinion its fine, noticed few weird phrasing, but only few. English is not my main language either, so probably not the best to comment on it. Wrote this just to let u know, that the text is good and readable, i don´t think anyone would have much issue about it.