Author: rehbkmoer
Version: Concept
Last Updated: 2021-06-27 07:05:05

Review by lovelight
Version reviewed: Concept on 2021-06-27 15:15:17

Hi, you wanted feedback on the text and how readable it is. In my opinion its fine, noticed few weird phrasing, but only few. English is not my main language either, so probably not the best to comment on it. Wrote this just to let u know, that the text is good and readable, i don´t think anyone would have much issue about it.