Mary The Queen

Author: MaryQ
Version: 0.1
Last Updated: 2022-07-14 01:02:38

Review by NotWhoIClaimToBe
Version reviewed: 0.1 on 2022-07-23 19:14:30

No game here, not really.

the Art looks good, so keep an eye out for this.

Review by cd1997
Version reviewed: 0.1 on 2022-07-17 17:53:47

Quick demo but with some fun bits. I like the art style, it's quite beautiful. The story is pretty straightforward, obviously quite unrealistic but it's the author's vision and I can get behind it. The GUI isn't too polished, the gameplay is quite non existent so far, no options other than linearity, clunky mechanics. Basically all you have to / can do is let time pass. The dialogue seems written by someone with English as a Second Language so I'm not sure if it's that there are incoherent bits, or just translation/grammatical errors. I think a bit of both.

My advice so far:

- The intro is way too badly illustrated: i don't mean that the images are bad, but that they do not help tell the story. All apocalyptic images but with no images of "Trevor" for example, no illustration of the gap in poverty. I assume it's hard to make so many images that illustrate well some of those more abstract concepts but some are also pretty straightforward.

- Allow the skip function for masturbation scenes, the clicking is kinda annoying because of how the images are, not really a mechanic and more of an annoyance.

Review by blandpallets
Version reviewed: 0.1 on 2022-07-15 22:02:50

Good Art style too bad it has no conent but can't wait to see what in store in the future

Review by bisubsissyslut
Version reviewed: 0.1 on 2022-07-14 18:48:47

Not a lot there but looks like it will be a fun game.

i look forward to it's development

masturbation part is a bit to clicky though.