A Dark Path

Author: Zer0zero
Version: 1.3
Last Updated: 2014-12-23 13:25:54

Review by darth123
Version reviewed: 1.3 on 2015-12-17 05:12:55

Good game so far. I'll be waiting for an update.


One more thing before I go:

"Waste" means garbage. You were looking for the area of the body called a "Waist."

Review by sybreal
Version reviewed: 1.3 on 2014-12-23 21:01:57

So far I like what I see. I was a little set back at first by the nature of the events that happen in the beginning but I'm glad I decided not to drop it. I hope more comes out soon.

Review by Notus
Version reviewed: 1.2.0 on 2014-12-21 21:12:40

It's not too bad, as far as I got into it. I sorta quit when it went from a gritty realistic-ish slave story into some kind of scifi genderswap woman training thing. Never did like those, usually the new woman is taught to be too stereotypical and the justifications for the sexual aspects are too tenous for my tastes. But yes, from what I saw, the writing was mainly fine, with a few strange run-ons in the later part.

Review by Shoggoth on the Roof
Version reviewed: 1.2.0 on 2014-12-20 22:20:31

This is a fun game.  Thanks for the MediaFire download.

Review by NotTroy
Version reviewed: 1.2.0 on 2014-12-20 00:21:50

This is off to a very promising start. The writing is really well done, the plot is very interesting, and I am excited to see what is really going on with Asher and his metamorphasis. I didn't really play around with any of the combat situations, as those are far from my primary interests with a game like this. However, maybe once the system is fully realized I will find myself more drawn to that aspect of the game. 

Overall I'm really impressed with your work and can't wait to see what comes next. 

Review by aceplym
Version reviewed: 1.2.0 on 2014-12-19 18:25:44

Interesting so far, I look forward to seeing some of the game mechanics implemented

Review by Sapphic
Version reviewed: 1.2.0 on 2014-12-19 18:01:50

"Error: Passage does not exist." Is the only thing that comes up. Maybe you messed up with the linking in Twine?