Phew, just wanted to share a few thoughts. Not really my cup of tea, simply because I would literally kill everyone in the house if all this happened to me. I could relate with the initial anger of the main character. Other than that, I really liked the writing and the images. Interesting subject too, definitely worth a try!
Waited a while before coming back and I'm pleased with what I've seen. Good work! It'll be interesting to see how you handle the choices for the branching storyline while still staying true to Ed Miller's original work.
Good start for a concept piece. As always nothing to fault with the graphic work that went with the story as the changes developed over time.
I found the writing to be interesting and the main character to be seemingly swifter to give in to the mental changes than others wrote about, but I don't consider it a bad thing if the core of the story is being true to Ed Miller's original work.
I look forward to the next update.
Working nicely, and great add with endings, just report u that ending 2 pic, has a wrong path so not working, didnt notice anything else cheers and kisses
For what we have at a 0.4 release is quite a treat. It has a lot of content with adult content in the mix as well. The way this game works the story into itself is phenominal and it has left me excited for what is to come with future updates.
I am looking forward to future updates with excitement, especially with the author's plan to add an after the story ending to this game. It will be very interesting to see what that will be like.
The rendered pictures for this game are excellent as well, as is expected out of Sorrow, with beautiful character models which only make this game even more enjoyable and hotter.
Overall I would say this game is a definite read for anyone who is a fan of this site.
Missing a little choice but everything else is of A+ quality.
I tend to prefer stories in which it takes more for the male character to accept having sex with another guy, but the idea of haunted house makes it somewhat plausible.
The rendered images look so good, but what I'm looking forward to is seeing how you'll diverge from the story.
Holy crap Sorrow is alive! And producing games!
Awesome game with awesome art as always, definitely worth a play!
One of my favorite stories superbly executed in Twine. Thanks so much! Looking forward to future releases.
An Ed Miller story with Sorrow adding artistry? Yes, please!