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This is a scary game. It took me around 6-7 hours to get to Act 7, and there are 20 acts. Erotic scenes are not that much to be honest, it's all about writing here. Well for this play through I will get MC to become bimbo before getting my true ending, Mistress route, in later version. It's problem for almost all games of this sheer length, same problem is with Secretary, a lot of story, good character progression but best Scenes appear only if Protagonist has become a bimbo slut as she is fine for to do everything for pleasure.

So basically you if you want to enjoy Story don't get to Bimbo route because honestly story is not that developed there as some characters which have potential to be changed for good remains same to some degree. It's a fun route but not that enjoyable narrative wise. It's good that there are more than 10 routes actually with different characters so you can spend 100 of hours in this one game easily.

I can write more here, but it's all about your journey in this game. Even if it's not an open world game, a very linear visual novel, it's a open world as far as Blake's mind is concerned.

Also, just like other reviewer before me said it's strange that Blake don't have boobs when he identifies as a woman or completely become a Bimbo. A Bimbo without any kind of boobs? What a joke.

Edit: Now I went through Walkthrough properly, I was avoiding it like a plague but still it has some interesting things.

I have played version 0.12 and back then it was possible to play multiple routes, even multiple true routes. For story wise Melinda True Love route looks best for me, she is broken and behind that icy witch persona is just a sweet woman. Anyways, True Love routes are Unicorns and difficuly if you are for porn because if you want hot scenes you will try to have sex with other characters and this game is ruthless in this regard and consider it cheating and somehow they kind of knows all about it. Of course there may be some path in future to have fun with others while being in a True Love route but still. 

It's not that True Love routes don't have less scenes, its just that when Blake is free and a slut he can have fun with others and we get to see good scenes. So, I will highly recommend to first clear the game with Bimbo Route, try other characters as you want, don't be bound with anyone, make Blake a bimbo slut. And after you have had enough, go to the routes you want to enjoy, with the help of walkthrough.

This game is so complex now that even JRPG games with 100 of hours of story will have less relationship dynamics than this one. 

There are two 2 Crazy Mad Developers on this site, one making Clean Slate and other is making Shattered. If you have come upon them and played them, you can say that you have enjoyed few of the finest arts made in whole human history, include Girl's Life too because that too is crazy in regards of the sheer community behind it.

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Shattered is an epic game. One of three great games on the tf site. The game is different. The opening of the game is longer than some other games in total. The game is so epic and long that I only managed to play through version 0.14. And yes, you do need that long. You have to read the text. Or you would miss stuff. Or the fun of the game. The game is a dystopian one. The backstory is laughable. But I understand the need. Rendering the amount of people toady - that doesn't work. The player has often too choose between bad and evil. The story is good, but isn't happy. Also how much you bend your ethics. The game is far form being finished. The progression speed is fine. I can't understand the problem of some other comments in that direction. it is one of the few games where you do not have trouble memorizing the names of the characters. Because the have a profile. The game is obvious form Russian origin. And the cannot hold it to bring in Cyrillic. I hate this. Write phonetic if you "must". Also there are some dictionary translations. So you may need one to figure the translation out. BE and AE is mixed. Version 0.17 sucked, really sucked. Because it has no music. And the picture quality sucked. The eyes of your mistress was some indistinguishable green pixel marmalade - honestly. Yes, the png version was an argument for harddisk manufactures. But 0.17 version was the best argument against webp ever presented to mankind. Deliverance sucks - form the gameplay. It seems the the authors run out of ideas. And the game has its shortcomings. Most important, Blake never gets tits. If some yeda guy says something about male body models, I remind them that Ambrosia has tits. And there is a dream sequence where Blake is bimbofied. He can be in the game to, but without beasts. Is that a joke I don't get? And the meaningless, confusing, out of place and time happening dream sequences. Some strange and totally unrelated stuff, and often disorienting. Does the game jump to another point? At least "label" them. Other games does that so much better. And they are sometimes really off. And most often the make no sense in the game context. And I don't mean the first one. Where Blake can decide if he goes gay. Still, one of the best games; and epic, so epic.

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WOW just WOW, really well done!

I didn't finish the story yet, but there's a lot of very positive points in the novel for me:

 

- Artwork, obviouslly. I mean, obviouslly.

 

- Realism in both visuals and the characters. Blake looks like a girl but still have a bigger thoracic box and shoulders, wihch is not always the case with every born male, but ok, it's a choice you made. The point is, his original gender is noticeable, which is realistic. I would like to  have unrealistic transformations, but I also appreciate the realism.

 

- The relationships and characters few very real. You have shapped their personalities and considered their hability to notice and rationalize things. This should be basic but I've never actually saw anyone do this in a adult game or novel, to make realistic characters. Sometimes people play dumb, sometimes they lie but you can kinda notice that they're lying, sometimes not. Blake is oblivious to his/her own arrogance, but sometimes notice that (you made it very smooth, which makes me think that you, the author, is or were somewhat like this).

Internal dialog was very interesting. Although it got kinda excessive at times, it was always a valid addition to the story. I mean, at some points you kinda expect the character to react in a certain way to things. I hate generic and blank characers and prefer to have indications on their personality. I like to see how they react to things. I prefer having what I was given and accepting that, rather than having a blank canvas as a character.

 

- Variety of expressions, backgrounds and you didn't save any efforts in doing new scenes in completly different scenarios instead of reusing the same ones. I saw many angles to the same room and a lot of different expressions on the charaters. There's a lot of reuse on expressions and some of them don't fit well for every situation, I think, but there's a lot of variety already. It's great, it's awesome, great work!

 

- Interesting story. And I appreciate that the world is show according to Blake's perspective. It's always implied, afterall he knows about the world he lives in so we don't have an obvious introdution to the world. 

 

One possibly negative point to this is that:

 

-I think Blake didn't resist at all to to the changes that were forced upon him/her. At the beguining of his new life I would expect at least some resistance. Anyone, even if they know they don't have a way out, will resist at least internally to abrupt changes. All I saw was a little hesitation.

Maybe you were trying to potray a society in which transgenderism and homosexualism are not seen as a taboo at all? So when someone came trying to transform Blake to a woman, he didn't have any taboos and simply went after his curiosity? Like "Oh I never saw myself doing this, but let's try it. Well, I guess I like it, but whatever, not a big deal". I mean, there's not even this kind of internal dialog. So I assume you wanted to idealize what you envision how society should see this matter? Ok I get it, but it doesn't tick my fetish, cause I like to see corrution and some resistence. Taboo or no taboo, this is the unwanted change of your previous self image.

But I also have my suspitions that Melinda and Rebecca are doing some stuff to Blake's mind while he sleeps. Or maybe it's in his food. They're obviouslly doing something. There's the butt growth, and the phycological changes were too sudden to be natural. Maybe I'll understand this when the plot thickens.

 

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The art style is quite pretty, not animated but it looks good.

The story exists, it's kinda trippy and both cliché and weird at the same time lol.  A lot of cliché femdom moments, but in weird combinations with stuff like being a bimbo, etc. And the MC talks to himself all the time lmao dude's inner monologue crazy

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I love this story, evertime it's updated it makes my day!