Hi,
This is Krl1, This is my first time trying out making a game in twine, I have been playing a lot of games like PE, Seceratary, SQ Cruise Ship, etc. and after taking an inspiration from them made this story that will primarily focus on sissification, feminization, & humiliation.
This game is for 18+ audience. I hope you enjoy it. All suggestions & criticisim are welcome.
Game will be a slow transformation game, I will look to develop pure love and sissification paths.
Hope you enjoy!
Download link: https://mega.nz/file/PWAXGZrZ#twyfY3Q_qjnqWXAlU1JlLJo6Vl3R_cuMEbrduhv3DY4
You are an average boy, looking to find your place in the world. People around you and yourself will determine what that future will look like.
You
Your Sister
Your Mother
Charlotte: Senor
Wade: Senior
Your best friend
Your manager
Samantha: Coworkeer
Major variations
Day 1.
Panty/commando/soiled
Hug/Run
Fall Straight/Flailing
Day 2
Get a job/Do Chores
Dinner/No Dinner
Day 3
Job path
Chores path-->> Do chores/Don't do chores
0.14f on job path day 14 done on fashion design course
0.09f on job path day 9 done on fashion design course
0.07 update on job path only until one week done
0.03
Day 3 complete-2 paths: Job path & chores path
0.02
Day 2 complete
0.01
Day 1 complete
With some spelling check and code debugging, this could be Almost Average...
EDIT: I tested another time, and found the only path with much content on it (the work path), and it made the story longer and more interesting. I would tend to think the game is starting being worked again after a pause, this would explain the pretty early feeling from the game. Still have potential in my opinion, though I find difficult to go through HTML errors and spelling issues. Could become above average with work.
Love it so far and I'm definitely keeping an eye out for any updates on this game. Keep it up <3
Decent start. You have a good storyline going with the sister. I hope you make it a bit different, because so far it feels like some of the others on this site, as far as the forced fem from the sister. I have high hopes for you though! Maybe add a percentage of 75% to the image (from the element) for the female college rep photo, as it fills more than the width of my screen.
The writing is a bit rough, theres barely anything here so it's hard to even review. I would check back with this game in a few months before giving any real rating
So far very interesting start.
I have tried out a few paths very currious where this wil lead in to
Subscribed and hope to see more of it quickly <3
