Fantastic.

Short, well written, and on topic.  Loved every bit of it.

Very nice and veeery short game. It's standard Lilly Games.

This is a fun little short story, and the title makes it pretty clear who it will appeal to. The only criticisms you could really throw at it are scope related, i.e. including images, longer sequences, and so on. Definitely worth a read if you're in the core audience.