Hello, I'm DeepSleep. I have played Rpg maker games for a while and I would like to present you my first game, that I have been working on for a while.
The story is about Anna and her boyfriend, who recently moved to live in the big city. Different challenges are in front of Anna, and the player will decide how the story will evolve.
It's NTR, Corruption game.
Version 1.3 is released early patrons it now contains more than 2800 cgs and more than 50 animations. So it's at least 4 hours of gameplay. In this update, Anna will be back from kidnapping Jeremy, She will meet Patricia on her run to the park, she will go to Timothy's to relax as well as visit colleagues from office together with Emily.
The v1.0 is also out for everyone, you can download it here.
First and foremost I wanna say that this is the first, and so far only, game I've played in the RPG Maker engines and I wanna say that I enjoyed the hell out of it. It's a great game in my opinion and has alot of potential. The character models are well done, the animations make it something that isn't just a speed thru, and the idea is amazing .. that being said however I did encounter some problems.
First. The writing. As another reviewer said it felt wooden. I'm not sure if English is your native language or not but there were problems with the writing all thru out the game. Maybe get a proof reader.
Second. The animations. They are great but the thing to advance them pops up unexpectedly most of the time and if you mess up you gotta wait for it to pop up again so you can advance. Maybe put it there full time and people can decide on their own to go on.
Third. Andrew, the Boyfriend. I know he's an essential part of the story, it's basically about Anna being corrupted away from him, but for alot of the time .. well it just feels like he's there. It feels like he doesn't matter to much t the overall storyline. Anna cheats, feels bad, and tells other people to not put him down but, and I'm not sure if this is planned for later or not, eventually even she'd start, at least subconsciously, thinking about him in a negative way sometimes. Overall in my opionion he doesn't really add much except something to use for basing Anna's corruption and giving you access to the Ashley scenes.
Fourth. Female Interaction. I'd honestly like to see more interaction between Anna and Rebecca, Anna and Emily, Anna and Patricia. You'd expect more between the sisters when they're living together and some more between Anna and Emily during the work stuff. I found that the lack of it was unfulfilling. Rebecca definitely seems like she'd spend more time with her sister, maybe talking up the sex she enjoys and such while subtly steering Anna towards it and away from Andrew.
Fifth. A glistch or a bug or something, maybe. That's right, I ran into a glitch or a bug or something. I'm not sure if it's my system, tho it shouldn't be considering my system is less then a year old, or if it's a problem with the program or the game itself but I had a constant problem. I'd play thru a couple events and I count events being animation to animation. As I was saying I'd play thru some events, two to three, and it'd take me 20 to 30 minutes, and then for some reason, as I stated above, the game would just quit on me and I'd have to start from my last save. And it kept doing it to me.
All in all as I said it's a great game. It had it's ups and it's downs. I'll wait for a few more versions to come out before dipping my toes back into it again just so I have more to play when I get back to it.
Wonderful corruption game !
I want to like the game, but the language feels so unnatural, like robots talking, or as if it was a parody of some badly acted porn flick. The author really need to rework the diagogue with help from someone that has a better grasp of colloquial English. Apart from that, the artwork is really good, and there seems to be a lot of potential for development.
Story seems nice, but very linear(6/10).
The art is better than the average game(8/10).
The grammar is bad(4/10)...
The game is pretty good as far as knowing where to go and looks good for maps. The pictures are all pretty nice, but I prefer a different type of girl. The only two complaints that I have is that the game feels really slow. Everything seems extremely bland for sex scenes and stuff IMO. Some of the panning shots could move a little faster and for some reason the game crashed for me around the point of buying the dress for Carl's party. Overall though, this game, while visually appealing, is very boring for me.