So this is my first attempt at making a game for this website and especially you!
I'm in love with the TFG community for a long time now and spend many hours ingame and enjoyed myself everytime.
So now it's payback time.
I created the game "This f*cking orb" in Twine. My very first attempt in story-telling whatsoever, first attempt at Twine, first attempt at erotica.
It contains quick transformation and many dirty pictures for your pleasure. After focussin on a linear story, I'm starting to develop different branches. It's all very new to me so have some patience with the progress please. :)
It contains many hot scenes and and some endings already as of by now *spoiler alert haha*. Many more are planned (let me know what you would like to see!).
Disclaimer: This game contains many sex scenes and is media-heavy. This is what I wanted to create in first place. After I read your feedback, I'll try to implement more story-based passages. But I kiiiiinda like it the way it is. :D Maybe I can find a good "halfway" of that. :)
So I put some thoughts into it and decided to just go both ways: First path will be very sex scene and media heavy with implementation of a little more story passages. Second path is under heavy maintenance right now. This is where I want to improve my story-telling. There will be some media and sex from time to time, but not so intense than path one. I hope you're happy with that! :)
Hopefully I will be able to work on this game and update it in not so long breaks in between.
Looking forward to hear your thoughts!
IT'S UPDATE TIME... AGAIN!
So I've just finished v0.6! The serious path has come to an end! You find 4 more endings and you can actually finish the latter path of the game. I'll still think and edit some of the branches in that path, maybe adding more content and endings if the storyline makes it possible. Otherwise I'll be focussing on the slutty path for now, finding a sort of endgame for that as well.
You are John Smith. A regular guy. Really nothing's special about you.
While jacking off to your favourite porn star, you notice something.. and the story begins.
First edition! 14.152 characters, 2.588 words and 31 passages in three hours of time. :)
First update! Version 0.1.5 contains a new sex scene (m/f). It's a minor update, which bought us to 20.585 characters, 3.545 words and 40 passages. :)
Second update! First branching implemented, so it's starting to feel a tiny bit more unlinear haha. :) We're at 32.720 characters, 5.652 words and 57 passages now! More than twice the amount of content than v0.1 <3
First branching got updated! You can play both paths you can choose first in the game now. First path has more content of course, the second one leads you to some content now as well. :) I included corruption and one more sex scene! And we hit 43.940 characters, 7.543 words and 71 passages! Whoooo! We trippled v0.1!
Just a quick update because I still had some time on my hands. :) In this update there is another scene with your best friend in the "smaller" branch. Right now we're at 49.617 characters, 8.575 words and 76 passages! :)
Thank you for your feedback! Some of you wanted more story-bases passages, so that's what you getting! The second path has a big story-telling update. Allthough I added another (skippable!) sex scene. We definetely will focus on story-telling in the second path and being a mindless slut in the first path. :) Stats: 64.286 characters, 11.159 words and 98 passages, woooho! :) 4.5x the content of v0.1!
Added a punishment ending in the second path. Small hint: Don't disappoint the orb too many times. ;)
Because I felt like it: Small update again! This time added another bad ending in the "fun path" and a little more content in the "story path". Enjoy. :)
After four months finally the next update! Current stats: 99.848 characters, 17.450 words and 44 passages with four possible endings! Whoooooho!
111.740 characters, 19.552 words and 154 passages! Added 4 endings! Finished one path!
It's a pretty good storyline, but pretty light. The orb mayforce her, but she is always able to stop the guy from cumming in her. Also adding futa's would be funny as I expected that with the ranch girl. Think about it: They are kissing and fondling, while undressing each other. The ranch girl pushes her down and after licking her pussy for a bit suddenly starts fucking her/you.
As a story game it's pretty good but sooo vanilla.
Not terribly long (yet), and mostly linear (so far), but the sex scenes are steamy and plentiful. If you're here for the smut, this game brings it and brings it hard. I also really enjoyed the sarcastic sense of humor weaving throughout the internal dialogue.
Two things would elevate this from "good" to "great" in subsequent updates: a few additional fully-developed branches, and a clearer sense of the ultimate endgame with a couple of true "win" scenarios. My personal preference is for at least one start-to-finish path, as opposed to hitting a wall in the story.
I won't claim this is my favorite game or anything, but I am impressed with the author's passion for the project. 7 updates in two days?! A for effort.
ver. 4.5 review:
I'm very happy with the most recent update. There is a clear distinction between the paths now and the story path has some interesting development brewing as well as allowing the player character to have some...fun...every now and again. ;) Can't wait for the next update!
ver 3.0 review:
So this game has very few choices and all of the choices are just variations on being a slut. Some may love this and for them this will be a decent game. I found it wanting but nice job on your first game! :)
This game is not bad. There aren't that many choices yet and I could do with fewer sex scenes and more story instead, but overall it's a good start.
Hoping for more paths soon and don't let the jerk reviews on this page get to you.