Bimbo MMO: The Beta is my first serious attempt at making an interactive story. It was originally created for the Virtual Worlds contest but it was not in a state to be published before the deadline.
It is very much a work in progress as of the time of posting. The Transformation Themes reflect the content that is currently in the game; I plan to add more themes with regular updates.
In the first release (2018-10-09) the story ends shortly after the first x-rated encounter.
You play as Brandon Doe, a rather average young man who's on a break from school and work. One day, you and your friend Mike sign up for a new MMO that is in the beta phase. You end up forced into a female avatar and sent down one of two class paths (Thief or Cleric).
The game contains a lot of graphic sexual content -- for you and a few other 'Premium Beta Experience Passport' holders -- but it seems to be having an effect on your mind. Will the game also start affecting your mind and body in the real world?
You - An average young man who does not have to worry about school or work for the summer.
Mike - Your friend
In the first release (2018-10-09) there are no branching paths that have a serious impact on the story. The most significant choices in this release are essentially "Do you want to see a sex scene?" and "Do you want the sex scene to go further?". This tab will be updated as necessary to identify missable scenes of interest.
2018-10-09 - Initial release
Excellent job, but rather short. Worth the time!
It's extremely preliminary of course, but I think it's well written, particularly the post-transformation adjustments and mental alterations that hint at new feelings and knowledge, instead of the common cop-out of swapping in a new character and personality. I'm looking forward to more!
Less a game and more a story where you occasionally make "choices" and press a button to advance to the next few paragraphs of text.
First off, I think the title sucks.
The rest of the writing is pretty good.
The intro is just awful, it's a textbook example of telling instead of showing. It's just a big dump of bland exposition that just starts becoming a story. Having said that, the proper story is actually surprisingly engaging. There's some typos (better to fix it sooner than later) but oretty good English. I was impressed by how quickly you can start progressing into being a deviant bimbo. I'm interested to see if the pacing holds up.
Exciting project overall.
I have to say, I'm very impressed by what's here at the infancy of this game. Everything is well written, grammatically correct, humorous, but above all, sexy. Well done. I can't wait to play the updates from here on in.