Improved clarity for the instructions and the addition of pictures have made this a super game, two thumbs up!
Agree with the other reviewers. An avatar would be nice. The transformations happen too quickly. I often cannot read what is happening to me while trying to read the text explaining what I am seeing. I think the timer should be virtual and count the number of turns (key presses) a user makes rather than a running timer. Each wrong move will result in progression of changes, but this would allow one to actually enjoy everything that is happening.
Writing for the game is good and you know the gist of what every puzzle is giving you (but you have to take notes or you will miss clues!), there are no images in this game, transformation is straight-forward MtF with good descriptions (but no way to pause the timer and check your avatar appearance), interactivity is high with multiple endings to find in this puzzle game but the timer for the avatar changes are brutal and if you get stuck working on the puzzles you'll quickly find yourself on the worst ending.
A fiendishly difficult puzzle game due to the brutal timer. But it's certainly something different and amusing to try to complete for the best ending.
Recommended if you like puzzle games.
Nice game but i hate speedrun.
Decent Scripting, Rather Sexy. Wouldn't hurt to Use something like Kisekae to make Pics for it.