In the near future, genetic therapy will become safe, inexpensive, and widely used. This is called the "Process." The results are almost all positive, and few downsides exist. But every so often, a patient ends up with undesired changes due to aberrant DNA. These are no disaster- they are never life threatening, and can always be reversed. But reversal requires approximately one year of careful medical examination and DNA mapping, in order to ensure the unexpected outcome does not reoccur. This is the story of one such patient.
writing and storytelling are actually really great here.
Dialogue feels organic and real. Like a conversation you might have been privy to in real life.
Only issue is that it basically ends right before it kicks off. Perhaps its just a dead path and other paths are more fleshed out, but i dont intend to spend twice as much time finding out.
Lot of potential here for a really great story, and potentially a good cyoa.
But as it currently stands it just needs more content. I do hope this one is continued and not left to languish like so many others. It was an enjoyable read.
This is a pretty unique game, in that the story is extremely well-written, with characters that really draw you in, the rare example of an erotic game where the story quality vastly outweighs any other considerations. The ultimate example of "came here just to fap, but stayed on account of the great story".
However, this still has one flaw. It reminds me of those D&D sessions I had with gamemasters that created these incredibly intrincate worlds populated with fantastic NPCs, each with intriguing backstories. And it's all wonderful, but somehow the player character him/herself becomes more like an afterthought, the MC is really there to witness and meet the fantastic NPCs.
It's the NPC's story, really, and the PC is just the witness/viewpoint. On account of that, it may be a little disappointing for people who are expecting to have a erotic experience that is centered on the player. You do have sex in the game, but mostly as a sidekick/secondary girl to all the NPCs.
I NEEEED more of this story! What kind of kinky shit is Faith up to that outdoes everybody else?? I mean she's so quiet and cute and innocent! I'm half-disappointed there's no sex scene with Robin but it sort of fits her character, she isn't comfortable cheating on a partner... but not even a fling? Please tell me this story isn't dead!
I have to agree with mattpantyhose: the lack of any save mechanic in a game that takes this long to play is actually physically painful. I was also disappointed to return to this game after the latest update (and nearly a year without playing) to find essentially no progress in the storyline.
That said, and still retaining my general dislike for wall-of-text games and no-illustration games, I love this storyline and wait impatiently for every update. I really can't recommend this game highly enough.
While this is more of a story, than an actual game (even as a CYOA), it still is really entertaining. As far as character description and development it beats all other games, that I have played on this site. The writing itself is descriptive and well done; the pacing, while slow seems adequate.
The only thing missing, that is somewhat painful at this stage of development is lack of any saving mechanic. It's often hard to find few hours to play it whole.
I enjoyed it a lot and can't wait for further developments.
