I think that if you update this game more and add something in the page, so we won't see just the white background, more colors, and some strange decisions when a person is young and do everything even if is ridiculous, even if the game is not so updated i still like the idea of what you are trying to do, in this place we don't usually see games of actually what is really the life, in this case of a college guy.

P.D: I'm not a native english so maybe there are some errors in my text(?.

Obviously the content is quite short and there are some grammatical issues. However, I am interested in the overall premise of the story that you have provided in your description. Simply the concept is well enough, your execution is what i am interested in. If we can work on your grammar, your exposition, and characterization of the two characters we have in place, I believe the intro could be much stronger. As a tidbit, I believe it would be nice (no idea how complicated this would be) to name each of the characters in your family, or at the very least, the PC/POV Character. I would love to help, though the coding of such things is beyond me. Writing, I can do. I would concur with the earliest review that states the description can be improved. The PC is simultaneously unrealistic and vague. Again, if we could have the abilty to customize our personal appearance with simple things such as "black hair" or "well muscled" or "rail thin" this would add some immersion to the game. I do hope you continue though as this is an intriguing start.

Not much here. I like the pictures you've used and there is a nice amount of choices in the content that is there.

Not a concept it will be when you finaly start the story

1 thing for sure you love big breasts a lot.

I would recommend not calling this version 1.0.0. This say that the game has a decent amount of content and is out of beta. It is not. I was able to check every possible branch in less than five minute. While it might be because its so early, i feel that there is very little actual choice to be made. You are a muscled dude and that's it. The clothes have no impact on your interaction with your mom.

Now onto things that are a bit less objective, I find the main character to be very hard to relate to, something that i expect of any good first person game, even more so if its a smut game. He is, as I said before, very muscled and seems to be the power fantasy of a bullied young teen that's insecure about his look. 

You stand infront of the mirror , getting out of your clothes to examine your body.You have a well build body , any teenager would dream of , a sixpack , muscles and a good looking face.The funny thing is that you aren't working out , it's natural that you're as handsome like this

This is all you get for a description. It's both too long and too short, too short because we still know almost nothing and too long because I can sum it up with by saying that he's good looking. Having a sixpack and not working out is not believable, you should allow us to choose to work toward it, or just say that he's worked out a bit in the past and kept the sixpack. How you act around your mother should also be decided by the player. Maybe wait till the player choose to stare at her tits before you make the character says he wants to fuck her.