A Haunted Honeymoon Vacation is a chose your own adventure styled visual novel game. The premise is that the protagonist was ditched at the altar on his wedding day by his fiance. Try as he may want, she won't respond to any of his attempts to get in touch with her outside of a note that said "I'm sorry". With non refundable honeymoon plans, his best friend convinces him that he may as well take advantage of the planned trip. What could go wrong? Ultimately your choices throughout the story will impact your your options as things unfold and ultimately how the story ends.
This game is being developed with Twine 2 and SugarCube 2.18
I'm sure there are typos and some of the grammar may be pretty bad. This is honestly the first time I've ever tried writing fiction.
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Pornstar ending path completed
Lots of small rewrites and changes throughout the story.
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I just recently came upon this game and really liked it, so thought I'd post a quick review. As others have mentioned, if you are coming to this game expecting immediate gratification of sex video clips, you are going to be disappointed. On the other hand if you looking for a well-written m2f, moderately slow transformation in the context of a ghost story, then you are in for a treat. The premise of the game is that after being stood up at your marriage, you decide to go by yourself anyway on the honeymoon vaction to a ski resort. There you are enjoying a hot springs when you meet the ghost of a Japanese, female, professional snowboarder, get surprised, and knock your head. To save you from drowning the ghost possesses you, but unfortunately can't figure out how to unpossess you. You and the ghost share your body, which slowly transforms into her old body the longer she is in your mind. While the transformation is progressing, you discover the snowboarder was murdered and investigate the circumstances of her death. The story behind why the snowboarder was murdered seems well-thought out, and the stages of the transformation are also well-done. The story is incomplete though in that there is not much content after the murderer is killed and the endings thereafter seem rushed.
If you're looking for sex, you will be disappointed. There is a small amount, but you have to play through a lot of setup and ghost story to get it, and it's not given much space in the story or game.
The ghost story is not "spooky" in any way, so it's not that kind of story either. It's more of a shared-body story than anything else.
The writing is good relative to a lot of tf games you'll come across, but maybe not good enough to be interesting by itself. It has to rely on the plot hooks and transformation elements to keep you interested, and neither of those have much sparkle.
I kept bumping up against unfinished paths that told me to go back and pick another option. I think only a tiny number of the intended endings were implemented. Even with those it felt like things were cut short and rushed.
I don't think there's really enough here that is finished as intended, and I was mostly bored by both the story and the sex, such as it is. Choices barely exist, and most of them lead to dead "not finished, turn back" dead ends.
While this could have evolved into a good game if it had been continued, it seems to be abandoned. I wouldn't advise anyone to spend time on this, unless you have a special and intense fascination for shared body stories, but even in that case you'll probably come away frustrated by the lack of completed content.
Just to echo what others have said here. Solid writing, more like a very unconventional ghost story than a standard TF game.
I can't wait to see some of the dead paths completed.
Is there a `good` ending so far?
This story has one of the absolute best plots I've encountered on this site. I was expecting just some TF porn, didn't get exactly that, but I won't say that I'm disappointed. It was kinda depressing and even scary at some points, but definitely worth playing.
Okay, this is one amazing story. It have multiple endings - and with multiple I actually mean MULTIPLE!! as in too many to count. I loved the story, loved the setting and as it is now, it is no complete for some of the endings and storylines, but many - if not most of them are complete, both those with bad ends and good endings (including a few happy endings)...
The game do have a few bugs - coding errors, and red lines, but there arent any errors that end up being game killers.
Play it and enjoy yourself, because this is a sure keeper.
Hopefully this will get updated very soon....