Rapid Estrogen Surge Syndrome is the first game I'm trying to create. It was fomerly named A New life but I renamed it due to a other game that was named similarily. It is a erotic text game. You take control of a young man who is down on his luck and gets involved in a freaky lab accident that cangches his life drastically as he gets feminized by it. Having lost his job and everything he (now rather she) resorts to some desperate means of making money.
The game will eventually focus on making money via prostitution, as well as on building relationships with the various characters you can meet. Right now the game doesn't have much content yet. I'm almost done with week one and you can meet some characters that will end up being important later. The early story is a bit linear but after some time you can actually make more choices that aren't purely cosmetical. I will attempt to build upon that in future releases.
In any case I hope you enjoy "Rapid Estrogen Surge Syndrome"
You take control of a young man who is down on his luck and gets involved in a freaky lab accident that cangches his life drastically as he gets feminized by it. Having lost his job and everything he resorts to some desperate means of making money.
Beware of light spoilers:
Main Character: A young man who is down on his luck and gets involved in a freaky lab accident.
Nicole: A sucessful businesswoman who runs a chain of women's clothing stores
Mr. Jackobson: The landlord of our main character
Mr. Doyle: A rich businessman that likes to spend money on hookers in his free time.
Alicia: A young enthusiatic whore that doesn't let her hard life get her down.
Rory: A young 18 year old guy who might be struggling with his gender identity.
It's really not that hard. You just click on whatever action you would like to take.
Relationship-guide (Beware of spoilers):
Here is how you get the most affection for the potentially romanceable characters:
Landlord:
Nicole:
Alicia:
Arthur Doyle:
Rory:
v.0.1.5.
To quote Prince of Elsewhere, there really isn't a lot to do.
There is definitely a good groundwork for later on, though.
The one thing I did notice, however, was some minor English spelling/grammar errors, such as misspelled words, commas not where they should be, and a few other things (when I wasn't skim reading.)
Can't wait until Devnim continues this game and brings us more content. It's setting up to be intriguing, if nothing else.
Pretty good overall except for the writing, Expect lots of transgendered woman, trap-girl and transexual persons
Given that there is so little game there I can't really give a proper review. It looks like there is the groundwork for a good selection of choices and paths even if the current snippet is quite the railroad. I enjoyed the Rory storyline the best of what was there and I look forward to the possibilites of that relationship.
I really like the opening of the game and hope you will continue working on it.
Some remarks:
1. You really should change the name as there already is a game out with a similar name.
2. The test is placed to far in the middle for me. COuld it be moved more to the rigth?
3. Some text is hard to read (Blue text on black background). Would be better to user brigther text colors.
4. Currently, the game seems to be a little bit too linear. The options are more pseudo-actions. That should change once the content grows bigger.
Oops, posted on the wrong game. >.<
