The Play Now link should be to an online-hosted version of the gam that s good idea, thank you

Shot but sweet! The images were good and the writing style was fine. I hope to see more like it; it definitely shows promise.

There is not much of a game here at the moment. There are four possible endings, each one following the same format, you are at a here, you must drink one of these potions, you don't know what the potion will do, you are instantly transformed, here is a picture of what you turned into, the end.
As a first pass at a twine game its a solid learning experience. For your next iteration I suggest you learn how to add counters to track status effects, you may also want to learn how to make explorable rooms. The concept of freely exploring a dungeon, opening chests to get unlabeled potions, and then slowly transforming into something sounds like an interesting game. It would also help give you skills that you will find useful as you move forward and continue to make games

The Play Now link should be to an online-hosted version of the game. It cannot link to a download page.

Heads up, the PLAY NOW button just takes you to media fire homepage.