Hi,
This is my first story (with a few interactive choices), about Jessie and his sissy transformation proccess.
The story contains 5 chapters (+ prologue and epilogue) , and contains images of all the female clothing the “hero” and the other females in this story wear.
Any feedback would be highly appreciated.
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Update 16.1.2018
Iv'e added a downloadble link. It also looks like the online link is working again.
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Update: 14.1.2018
Thank you all very much for the detailed and helpful reviews.
First - I've uploaded a quick new version that fixed the broken epilogue.
As you all noticed - english is not my first language. I realise now I need to put extra emphasis on grammar, spelling and editing (to be honest I assumed I will have mistakes - but I believed they will no be as common and as distracting).
This wasn’t created originally as a game but as a completely linier story (with the pictures) . Only later I transformed it to this format and added some “branching” choices. I understand this transformation wasn’t made in the best way and some rethinking has to be done regarding the structure and in order to better fit the new format.
Thanks again for all the reviews and players. I am really happy I many people played it and gave feedbacks.
I will keep you updated soon….
16.1.2018
- Iv'e added a downloadble link. It also looks like the online link is working again.
14.1.2018 - Ver. 0.8.0.1
- I've uploaded a quick updade that fixed the broken epilogue
A great story with a few tiny branches that lead back into the same story. Nice images. Some typos but a nice read.
Really nothing of a game just a short story you do get a few choices, but they don't lead to a different outcome.
It probably because of its early version, but in the end the outcome will not be different, you are either forced or willing that’s it.
There is very little in terms of content, but its a fair read if you got 15 minuets to kill.
Too early for Score
Love ya all~ CutieFur
I like the story, I just wish there were more choices. Most of it is just read and click. Other than that, good job
like review below unfortunately link not working. Could you please fix this so we get to enjoy this story? thanks
I keep getting server connection errors,a download file really would be nice and would prevent this story from somehow becoming lost
