THANKS FOR THE CRITISIM FROM THE COMMUNITY IT REALLY HELPS :)
I'm working on on completely revamping the middle section to create a looping storyline, if anyone could suggest some ideas, that would be appriciated.
I would like to point out that,THE .RAR DOES WORK with chrome on windows.
Just a concept, this is my first game however and I don't know much about code. It is more of a CYOA story than a game with a few choices.
Kinda the plot of ready player one but sissifed....
dystopian future with no jobs, the only outlet being a VR world created by one mega corperation...
It's a linear game.
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added stat system
added another pathway
added two new endings
added longer intro
added more hypno
fixed a couple of spelling errors
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changed intro and story so there is less plot holes
added more of sister ending
added an alt ending
fixed some typos and got rid off more unused files, getting the overall file size to 150MB
no bad game, promising and cool inspiration. keep working so we see how its develop
the only remark I got is that you review the route and titles of some of the lasts photos some got a different name or didn't link with anything apart from that everything is good
GOOD WORK
Every version gives an error for WinRAR saying file is in an unknown format or damaged. Help?
I have to say, even though you kinda took the Story basics from Ready Player One and completly changed the game - it feels more unique now. You took some time and changed a lot compared to the beginning.
I dont know how you plan the game in the future (because you added some endings) but I think with you new Status attributes and other additions that you could focus more on the path to the player feminasation. In my opinion it guess to fast from arriving in the sissy game to full Transformation - but thats propably something you are working right now. Slow and understandable m2f is always better than just instant transformation.
But right now, the game is nice and enjoyable. A lot of pictures doesnt really work/are missing. I am excited what you have planned for the future and will follow the development. So in Overall: nice done for your first game. :)
.rar file is corrupt for 0.0.5.
The file is corrupt and can't be opened
