Looks promising, though I've only played the intro part so far (may edit after part 2).

My main feedback so far would be it doesn't seem the type of story that's going to have TF in it at this point, so like a disclamer at the beginning with assurances it's going to be there, and maybe pointers in the options on how to get there. (This would ruin the surprise, but seeing as most people here will be coming at it for TFs it seems worthwhile.)

The second thing is that while having sexuality selection come up organically sounds like a good idea, because I didn't know the four options I selected 'alpha' when I saw it had shemales, wheras had I known about bi-curious at the time (I only know now from the ending splash) I would've selected that to see all possible content. So just a straight-up unmissable four-way choice as like the first choice in the game might be a better way to do things.

As others have said, English could do with a polish, but that kind of thing can wait until last once the game, art and story are all in place. At this point it'll just distract you.

It definitely needs to be made clearer that the "Intro" download is required and should be run first, not an earlier version of the game that has been superseded.

The game is designed for incest and the naming of characters and relationships is an attempt to dodge around Patreon rules that have seen this kind of content forced off the platform in the last year or so. If you don't find fantasising about incest titillating then trying to set the characters up as friends, orphans that shared an orphanage or distant relatives can be attempted but it really doesn't work. The storyline isn't flexible in that way and it further spoils the weak script.

The graphics are not the game's strong point but do help tell the story. Unfortunately they bloat the game file out to a significant size. If you like the incest kink then there are better games available on sites that don't require TF to be included in their listings. On the plus side, a little polishing of the script would pay big dividends. The author has put in a lot of work on this already.

To anyone wanting to play this game or comment: DO NOT START WITH THE MOST RECENT FILE

To understand what is going on you need to play the "Introduction" file first, then proceed to "S1M01", which is the first act after the intoduction.

The art is likely to always be polarizing, I consider it good enough to tell the story, but its certainly not sexy, but at least things make sense if you do them in the correct order, otherwise you'll be blindsided by being told by a character you picked a relationship to like "roommate" for that "they still dream of when you used to tuck them into bed and read them a story"... these people are NOT blank slates the user can choose a role for, I assume the "pick a realationship" exists merely to avoid legal issues with certainly realtionships by leaivng it up to the user to fill in those boxes.

I don't mind the graphics, honestly it's the least of any issue I can take with this game. But as others have said, the plot needs some cleaning, or you need an editor that knows english better. At first I thought I kind of figured it out due to the two characters asking why you left, and then talking about all four of you together. So these are your kids having tracked you down right? Maybe no, because then they talk about "Mom and Dad"...and at that point I kind of gave up trying to make sense of anything. I became a patron just trying to figure out what might be going on...but all you did was list tags. I didn't even see any notice of transformation content, and all I DID see was some mention of aliens.

It's always good to see new creators and their work...but you need to polish what you have quite heavily at this point.

Thoughts as I go along:

-Opening with a sexuality choice is interesting but I think this could be implemented better. When it says that only ___ scenes are allowed or ___ scenes are not allowed, what's the total list of scene types? I'd like to know what all content there is before I start deciding what I want to see. Likewise, the circle feels unbalanced. There's a straight option, a gay option, and a bi option. All is well, but then there is an alpha option out of the blue? It just feels out of place. At least include a beta option then, right?

-It starts then asking for names of characters that I have no idea what their role in the story will be. I like name customization, but if I'd like to know a bit about who I am naming before I give them a name. Well then as I say that, next slide asks me to decide what the person is in relation to the main character which is interesting but odd. I still don't know enough about them nor how they will relate to the main character later on, so it makes it difficult for me to decide what to refer to them as.

-"You already know Jenny, right?" Literally who the fuck is Jenny?

-Are these graphics from the Sims? That's actually hilarious.

-What is this introduction? We're thrown in the middle of something with zero bearings on what is happening. There's clearly some history between these characters, none of which is conveyed to the reader. There are prompts about why the main character feels or acted a certain way, but I don't know enough to say anything. Did choosing "new game" somehow send me halfway through the story? I am very confused. 

-There are a lot of grammar issues, I assume English isn't the author's native language. Might want to get someone to proofread.

-Alright two full days of the story passed and I still have absolutely no fucking clue what is happening. I have to stop here, this story is completely unfollowable.

I don't recommend this game until the plotline (if you can even call it a line...) is cleaned up.